She knows what it’s like,
To be terrified
Of the face looking back,
To want to run,
But there’s no where to hide;
The world too small,
To keep them at bay,
The haunting thoughts…
She knows what it’s like,
To put in words,
Feelings you can’t decipher;
To write down rhymes,
At dusk with the moon
Illuminating
The tears streaming down.
She knows what it’s like,
To shrivel back,
At the touch of a hand;
To build a wall,
Around one’s brokenness;
To live a life,
Barely surviving;
She knows what’s it’s like,
To feel alone,
With a crowd all around;
To search for hope,
At the Brink of desperation
And that’s the reason,
She won’t let you go.
She knows what’s it’s like
And vows you won’t,
have to surf it alone.
the above image is courtesy of Juniorgman.tumblr
This is really good, but I also have to point out that it’s a Criminal Minds quote
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I know! 😄 currently re-watching it again. It’s one of my favorite series.
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It’s amazing! This season has been really good.
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I haven’t started on season 11 yet. Waiting for it to be over so I can binge On it. I started all over again from S01
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Haha I couldn’t wait
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Sounds like you’re writing my story…
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Hehe, ahh,I love seeing that someone connects with the words. Thank you Azul.
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Most welcome 🙂
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Obviously you have your own thoughts on what your words mean to you, or what you want to convey with them; of course the reader may from time to time make their own interpretation. I thought it was beautiful in its’ openness. I’m sure it has many layers of meaning to many different people. Thank you, very inspiring.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read the poem and dissect it. I love reading people’s perception and interpretation of it.
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Hauntingly beautiful!
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Thank you very much Deb ☺️☺️
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Beautifully written… Please checkout my blog.
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This is reality!!!! Awesome!
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Thank you Ishma! 😄 have an amazing weekend.
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hehe!! thanks! 😉 I did have an amazing on!
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Great. Because she suffers and knows what it’s like gives her a kind of special knowledge. She knows how much it hurts so she won’t do it to her. It makes her noble in her suffering and brave. It also makes her dependable. But I feel terrible for her experiencing all this pain over and over.
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It is a terrible feeling. You nailed Mandi! She had been through the worst of it and didn’t want anyone else to go through it.
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I’m sorry to have nailed it because I think she had a terrible time of it. But I am glad she doesn’t wish the same on others.
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Yet another heartfelt piece. Your words spoke to me Ameena. They always do. Evocative language and such deep emotion.
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Thank you very much Vidisha. You have no idea how much I appreciate reading the comments . ❤️❤️ it brightens my day
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It was an absolute pleasure Ameena. Reading your work is a delightful thing in itself. I’m glad you feel this way. ❤
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Very powerful and moving!
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Thank you very much Pj. I really appreciate your support ❤️
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My pleasure!
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Moving.. Speechless.. Beautiful.
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Thank you Hasmeet. 😊
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So unpretentious and honest. I hope she finds peace.
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Ah, I hope so too. I think she will, 🙂
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As always, powerful and touching. Your works never fail to connect with the reader.
Keep it up! Have a great week ahead 🙂
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Thank you Gurl! Aww, have a wonderful week too ❤️❤️
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🙂
You are welcome !
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Brokenness can be beautiful, as is this piece.
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It can be. Depends on how we look at it. Thank you 😄
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I am cheering her on 🙂 Wonderful piece!
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Me too Joy! Me too 🙌🏽
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Superb
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Thank you ! 😄😄
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Heyyyyy Ameena. I just got back from traveling for almost a week. Your post is the first I’ve read since returning. Great job on writing on the unfortunate reality of far too many girls and women.
Hope you’re well, and please have a wonderful day and week.
🙂 ❤
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Yay! How was the journey, hope you had an amazing time. I also have been away from the blogging work for almost the entire week 🙈🙈.
Awww, now this makes me happy, being the first ☺️.
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It was a very busy time. Haha. I’m glad to be home. I have so much to do. Haha.
Have a wonderful week Ameena.
🙂
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I am glad to hear that 😀.
Thanks Stacy.have a wonderful one too.
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🙂
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