“Remember, be-have!”, Christine warned the kids right before they stepped into the restaurant. She marched over to the counter with Mark where they requested a menu for their table.
Christine had barely slumped into a seat when the terrifying sound of “mama” came to her ears. She smiled at her husband, “so much for behaving”.
“What happened sweetie?”, she asked, putting on her mummy face as one of the four approached her with teary eyes.
“Who’s your favorite child”, her teary four year old asked.
Experience with three previous kids had taught Christine there was no right answer to the question. She threw Mark a sympathetic look. The sides of her lip turned upward as she watched her husband handle the situation gallantly.
“Once this come”, she said, pointed to a growing bump, “my garage is officially out of business”. Mark couldn’t contain his laughter as he remembered that was the same thing she said after their 3rd.
“We’ll see” he teased, knowing although the kids drove her nuts, she wouldn’t have it any other way.
Word count: 176 words. Thank you Etol Bagam for this week’s picture. This is my submission to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers photo prompt challenge hosted by Priceless Joy. Each week, we get a picture to write a 150 give/take 25 word story on. You’re welcome to participate, the more the merrier. Just click HERE.
Cute story! I like the phrase, “this garage is closed.” LOL! I think most mommy’s feel that way sometime or another. Loved the ending, “…she wouldn’t have it any other way.”
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Thank you Pj, I am so glad you like it. 😄
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Aww….so cute. Short and sweet!
Have a great day!
Arcane owl
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Thank you! 😄 have a wonderful day As well 🙂
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Welcome 😉
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love it
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Thank you! Now this makes me happy 😄
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Fun little story! And yes, kids will always ask who is your favorite 🙂
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Hahaha, yes they will and so will siblings too! 😄 glad you like it.
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An excellent story!
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Thank you! Glad you like it. 😊
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Lovely story 🙂
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Thank you very much 😊
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Sincerely,
Robert
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Thank you very much, I appreciate it. ☺
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AWW! Love it! Cracking up about the garage statement! YUP, wouldn’t have it any other way! I just had my hubby rub my stomach tonight as we were watching a show about a pregnant woman and she wanted her husband to feel the baby move. He said, but you don’t have a baby in there. I said, “How do you know?” HAHA! JUST KIDDING! He is right! But I did love feeling their kicks!
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haha 🙂 it is such a cute story ! love it
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Hahaha, Thank you! 😄
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Such a sweet story Ameena!
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Thank you very much Lynz 😊
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loved it!! very cute
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The only problem with sentences like ‘my garage is officially out of business’ is that the kids are bound to remember the and repeat the in the most embarrassing situations… Loved the story though! 😉
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Haha yeah. I was going to include a line where the kid was looking at his parents confused but my word count’s already exhausted 😁. Thank you
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Cute story,Ameena. Loved the line ‘“my garage is officially out of business”:-)
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Haha, Thank you! 😄
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Her siblings must have teased her, poor baby. Kudos to Christine, do not know how she do it and seem patient like a circle.
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Sweet story! Love your choice of words she said to her husband telling him additional member to family no longer an option! Cute. 🙂
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Hehehehe
Lovely story.
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Thank you! 😄😄
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