What was it like, she asked:
It was the soft drizzle,
Of rain-
Before a stormy weather;
It was the haunting
Silence-
Before rumbling thunder.
It was the knowing
Which comes-
Before a world comes undone.
The bitterness of coffee
Before-
It hits an ulcer.
It was all that I knew,
But regretted-
Ever knowing.
It was the rippling,
Of waves-
From a miniature pebble.
It was the puddle of rain,
Following-
A storm aftermath.
It was wanting
To retrace-
But all was said,
All was done.
The above image is courtesy of Pinterest
Deeply beautiful.
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Thank you very much ☺
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“But regretted-
Ever knowing.” 😉
You are simply awesome. You do it so easily. Wow Ameena. 😛
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So Are you! 😄
Thank you very much Ahmad. 😊
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“All was said, all was done.” I like this line, for it reminds me that we can’t redo the past. But no matter how painful and ugly or happy and exciting it was, it becomes part of who we are. Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing.
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Unfortunately we can’t, just got to make the best of the future. Thank-you Viera 😊
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Exactly! And you deserve a star 🙂 Keep writing!
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Oh, this is beautiful! ❤
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Thank you very much 😊
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My pleasure, girl. 🙂
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Very beautiful 🙂
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Thank You Hiba 😊. I’m glad you like it.
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Very beautiful haunting poem!
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Thank you Pj. Glad you like it. 😊
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“What is it like?” “Its like knowing strings of your heart are gonna be pulled and a tear may even come to your eye!” “Yup that’s what its like as soon as I click on your blog!:) ❤
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beautiful 🙂
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Thank you sis! 😄
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So, Beautiful
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Thank you Ebby. I’m glad you like it. 😊
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Wonderful poem.
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Thank you! E
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And those of the Heartbroken Choir, current or past say Amen.
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Hahahha, this cracked me up :D. I hear ya!!!
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:). I’m weird and I like it.
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how well you describe the build-up and fallout of heartbreak…the imagery is stunning. This is so, so good.
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Absolutely amazing !!
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Aw, thank you very much Julianne
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