Don’t fall in love with me she said-
I shine too bright,
I burn too fast,
My embers and flames,
Are tortuous beyond sight;
Don’t fall in love with me she said-
I am jagged at the edges,
Holed in the middle,
All shades of dark surround me,
My smile would be your nightmare.
Don’t fall in love with me she said-
My smile would trap your frail heart,
And I’ll leave you hanging,
It’s a curse, it’s the truth,
I’m a hard face to get rid off;
And fall in love with her he did-
You’re tough, I’m tougher
You’re scarred, I’m broken
You’re grey, I’m a dark vault
Your nightmares would be appealing.
And fall in love with her he did-
It’s a curse, it’s the truth
I’d love to Marry you;
If you do, leave me hanging,
It’d be a pleasure to be left
Hanging by you.
The above image is courtesy of : Tumblr.com Inspired by the above quote.
This is beautiful 💕
Amazing 😇
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Thank you luv 😊. I am glad you like it ❤️
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Wow… I’m falling in love with her for sure..
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Aww, she would love that very much! 😄
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this is….it’s….brilliant! I ❤ it
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Thank you very much! A now I am happy! 😄
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Excellent…………….
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Thank you very much Sir!
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WELCOME……….
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Aww i felt like that
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Yay! I’m glad you could connect with this. Thank you 😊
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😇😇😇
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WOW, a story of brave love.
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It is! Thank you very much Azul. 😄
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Welcome 🙂
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A really wonderful poem.😊
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Thank you very much Jessie. I am glad you like it. 🙂
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This is one of your best work in my opinion. I absolutely love it. It touched my heart, and I didn’t even realize I was holding my breath until I finished reading it and I let it out. Superb, Ameena.
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Thank you! You have no idea how happy this makes me feel. 😄😄
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masochist! 🙂
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I can relate to it ❤ Such a beautiful piece ❤
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Awww, I’m glad you could Hasmeet. Thank you very much. 😊
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Mashallah this is beautiful! I love all of your work but this might be my favorite!
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Aw, thank very much Chelsea☺️☺️
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A work of art this is 🙂
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Aw, thank you very much! 😄
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Oh wow. Looks like he’s really co-dependant. 2 highly insecure and broken people together. Sad and unfortunate really.
Have a wnderful day Ameena.
😊💕
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It is sad, the whole idea of “brokenness”. But then again, they say, 2 is better than on. Who knows.
Thank you Stacy, have a wonderful week too. My weekend begins tomorrow 😄
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Yeah!!!! Have a wonderful weekend.
🙂
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Lovely. Just so beautifully written.
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Thank you very much Vidisha. You are a dear 😊
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So are you. 🙂
And it’s a pleasure.
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Ameena,this was really awesome!
Kudos! I love how you portrayed the emotions in the first lines especially 🙂
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Thank you very much Hargun. The first part came much easier to me. I am glad you like it😄
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You are welcome 🙂
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Hi Hargun,I left a comment on your post but now it seems to have disappeared. WordPress have been sending my comments to spam box. Care to check pleased it’s in the spam?
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I’ll un-spam it straight away.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
Thanks for notifying 🙂
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Omg, there were four more!
I wouldn’t have known it otherwise. Thanks again 🙂
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Haha, I found a few more on my spam too. Only glad to help Hargun 😊
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Lovely and powerful. Ameena.
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Thank you very much PJ. 😊
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My pleasure!
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Fabulously amazing, reflects the depth of a love between two persons.
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Thank you! I’m glad you like it 😄
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Ok I won’t fall in love with you then.
XD
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Hahaha, 😀
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Lovely 🙂
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Thank you very much Nayana 😊
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