She had the most beautiful mind,
A galaxy of infinite stars
In the form of thoughts-
Swirling around,
In her brain’s sulci and gyri-
I wonder,
I just wonder
How one creation could hold
So much genuine-
Creativity
Passion
Intensity
With profound humility.
And she’d smile, bashful
Waving off compliment;
Lower her gaze hiding,
Those caramel eyes- behind
geeky glasses.
And I wish,
Oh I wish,
She could see the view
From where I stand.
She watches the universe
Admiring it’s beauty-
Fade to black
Grow into light
Day and night;
But she,
She holds the most beautiful
Universe-
In that mind of hers.
image credit: the HealthyPlace
Beautiful articulation. 👍👌
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Thank You Ahmad 😄
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Ohhhhhh, wonderful poem Ameena. I like the idea of the most beautiful universe existing in her mind.
Have a great day.
🙂
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Aw, Thank you Stacy. I like to look at people and crowds and sometimes wonder the thoughts that go on in their minds. ☺
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Gorgeous words Ameena!
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Thank-you very much Lynz. 😊
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you are welcome dear 🙂
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Awww this is so pretty =)
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Thanks Chealsea 😄😄
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WOw! Just amazing!
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Thank you for taking the time to read it. 😊
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Struck profound!
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Thank you! I’m glad 😄
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Awesome, so well written! “A galaxy of infinite stars”… love it!
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Thank you Joy. I’m glad you like it 🙂
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Beautiful uplifting poem Ameena!
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Thanks Pj! I’m glad you think so. 😄
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🙂 I do!
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Awesome my dear! 🙂
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Aww, thank you girl! ❤
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Loved it… So, pleasure is all mine 🙂
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I nominated you for the Blogger Recognition Award 🙂
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Nice…
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Thank you. 😊
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Beautiful…
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Thanks Trae 😄
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Beautiful and strong poem! She did not let anything distort her vision of the universe! 🙂
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Thank you JC. No she didn’t! I love people like that.
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Absolutely beautiful!
👍👍
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Aw, Thank you girl! 😄
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You are welcome 😉
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Aw, thank you girl! 😄
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