She had the most beautiful mind,
A galaxy of infinite stars
In the form of thoughts-
Swirling around,
In her brain’s sulci and gyri-
I wonder,
I just wonder
How one creation could hold
So much genuine-
Creativity
Passion
Intensity
With profound humility.
And she’d smile, bashful
Waving off compliment;
Lower her gaze hiding,
Those caramel eyes- behind
geeky glasses.
And I wish,
Oh I wish,
She could see the view
From where I stand.
She watches the universe
Admiring it’s beauty-
Fade to black
Grow into light
Day and night;
But she,
She holds the most beautiful
Universe-
In that mind of hers.
image credit: the HealthyPlace
Beautiful articulation. ππ
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Thank You Ahmad π
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Ohhhhhh, wonderful poem Ameena. I like the idea of the most beautiful universe existing in her mind.
Have a great day.
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Aw, Thank you Stacy. I like to look at people and crowds and sometimes wonder the thoughts that go on in their minds. βΊ
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Gorgeous words Ameena!
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Thank-you very much Lynz. π
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you are welcome dear π
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Awww this is so pretty =)
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Thanks Chealsea ππ
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WOw! Just amazing!
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Thank you for taking the time to read it. π
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Struck profound!
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Thank you! I’m glad π
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Awesome, so well written! “A galaxy of infinite stars”… love it!
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Thank you Joy. I’m glad you like it π
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Beautiful uplifting poem Ameena!
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Thanks Pj! I’m glad you think so. π
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π I do!
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Awesome my dear! π
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Aww, thank you girl! β€
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Loved it… So, pleasure is all mine π
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I nominated you for the Blogger Recognition Award π
https://wordsandnotion.wordpress.com/2015/12/10/blogger-recognition-award/
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Nice…
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Thank you. π
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Beautiful…
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Thanks Trae π
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Beautiful and strong poem! She did not let anything distort her vision of the universe! π
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Thank you JC. No she didn’t! I love people like that.
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Aw, Thank you girl! π
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You are welcome π
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Aw, thank you girl! π
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