The Soul selects her own Society-
The soul selects,
Her own society;
Then shuts the door,
To her majority;
Unmoved, she notes
All the chariots pausing;
At her low gate,
Barely gives them notice.
Unmoved she finds,
An emperor kneeling
Upon her doormat;
She gives him no notice.
Unmoved, she chose one,
Then closed all valves-
Of her attention,
Turned stone to their cries.
The soul selects,
Her own society;
Chose solitude,
Over majority.
Napowrimo- Day 5: today’s prompt says Find an Emily Dickinson poem – preferably one you’ve never previously read – and take out all the dashes and line breaks. Make it just one big block of prose. Now, rebreak the lines. Add words where you want. Take out some words. Make your own poem out of it!
I chose to re-write “the soul selects her own society-“, one of her poems I haven’t read before. You can find the original poem HERE
Chose solitude,
Over majority.
these lines define me !Greatly written 🙂
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That’s a great character to have!
Thank you Izza 😘😘
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You are quite welcome 🙂
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I like how even tho he is a Emperor she doesn’t give him notice. Great job! Now will have to read more of Emily Dickinson’s poetry!
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Me Too! The Emperor part was one of things thar fascinated mw about thw original poem. Yeah, you should! They are really good although sometimes they make me think more than I want to 🙂
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We think alike 🙂 And yes I remember reading some of hers before a long time ago and they can cause deep thinking!
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A really amazing poem I love the concept of what she is saying x
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Thank you! I went through a lot of her poems trying to look for the right fit, amd this juat clicked. 🙂
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It did x
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Wonderfully written, Ameena!
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Thank you very much. Its actually an Emily Dickinson’s poem i re-wrote slightly 😀
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