“What on God’s earth are you two doing?” Grandma demanded
“Get your heads outta my car!”
Uncles Jack and Paul, wriggled out from under the car and stood at attention under grandma’s scrutiny.
“Well?”
They’d gone to visit uncle Paul’s future father-in-law when the car stopped working midway, leaving them to walk through long muddy tracks to get to the house. They looked like a pair of scrawny adults after a mud play by the time they arrived and Paul’s fiancée declared “there is no way you’re meeting my father in this crappy state“.
Both uncles Paul and Jack are convinced someone played a cruel joke on them and they were determined to find evidence of foul play.
“Don’t you want to know who we suspect?”, uncle Jack questioned Grandma.
She shifted her weight on one hip, sifted her fingers through graying hair, took a deep breath and said,
“you two- left my car- alone- in the middle of Lord knows where?”.
I didn’t wait around to see what happened next.
Word count: 171. This story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers photo prompt challenge where we write a 70-175 word story surrounding the provided photo prompt. This week’s image is courtesy of Pixabay.
Haha wow.
Amusing story 🙂
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Thank you Hiba 😄. I’m glad you think so.
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Cute story Ameena! Sounds to me like grandma might be the culprit? Just want to remind you to link your story to the InLinkz story board. (If you already have, then I apologize. I haven’t seen the link come through yet).
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Oh my, I haven’t. I forgot to link it. Thank you for reminding me Pj.
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LOL! No problem! 🙂
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Funny! Grandma’s very protective of her car! 😊
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She is very! 😄 Thank you jessie
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Lol. I wonder why Grandma did something to the car? Doesn’t she like her son’s fiancé?
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Haha, that’s a nice Theory there Mandi. I didn’t go as far as deciding the culprit. But not liking the fiancée would be a great motive 🙂
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Hello Mandi, Ieft a comment on your post yesterday, but now it’s disappeared. WordPress had been sending my comments to spam box.
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Hi. Actually WordPress sends most anything to my junk box. I’m going through it now. Another lady, had that problem last week, her comments on a blog I wrote kept disappearing, Not sure why, but it seems to have fixed itself now. Thanks for your comments and reading Ameena.
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amusing story 🙂 but I am curious to know what happened next 😀
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Hahaha, sorry Sana sis, perks of flash fiction. Only so much story can fit into the limited words. 🙂
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Great story, love the ending, but yet not…for yeah it leaves you wondering what happened! 🙂
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Thank you joy! But that’s the fun part, “the wondering”. No fun in telling what happens next 😀
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Haha! :p I am a very curious person by nature, I don’t like wondering 🙂 I will remember that line about the fun part when I write a story leaving you hanging 🙂
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Very amusing story, Ameena. 🙂 Grandma doesn’t seem to be the type of person you want to annoy!
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Thank you Louise! Oh, she is the defense nicely the kind of person you want to remain on her good side 😀
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Great story, Leaves you with a question mark at the end.
Have a nice day 🙂
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Thank you for taking the time to read my posts today Sam. I appreciate. Have a wonderful day As well.
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🙂
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