The sandy hills on the path,
did little to deter her journey.
She strode with the will of an Arab
swordsman as the winds blew wildly.
A veil on her face to obscure the marks,
the desert would leave on them.
Through slit openings, she gazed down the path
never doubting if it was worth it.
Wear on her soles, tear on her cloth,
my girl kept on stamping.
Defying the laws of the red evening rays,
she prayed to be protected from them-
The jinn who arose at the set of the sun,
even they little weakened her motive.
And centuries passed, while Bedouins wondered
About the traveler who refused shelter.
Neither water nor food, nor change of shoes-
Always, she declined an offer.
The end of her journey, unknown to them
Nonetheless, they prayed for her.
Any soul braving their harsh barren land
Was one, in need of prayers.
Now tales are told, of a lone traveller-
Who journeyed amidst harsh weather.
That’s marvelous š
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Thank you InSach! š
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Love it!
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thank you! I’m glad š
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And the JOURNEY til your book is published will be how long?? š š Great poem once again! I felt like I was walking in the desert as I read
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Hahaha, hopefully not as long as the journey of the girl on the poem š .
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Beautiful poem š
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Thank you very much š
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Wow!! A beautiful Journey!! Much much much better then mine š Awesome!!! ā¤
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Hahaha, nooooo, I DO NOT agree :D. But really, thank you !
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Heads down š Welcome my dear!! š
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How incredibly moving. I could really feel myself there. I’m lost for words.
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Awww, Thank you. That was the feeling I was goin for š
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I love this game so much! it’s emotional, I got attached to my friend person haha
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I actually didn’t know it was a game until I googled “journey” and the image popped up :D.
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Ah so you have never played it? it is worth it. it’s only like 4 hours long, if that. but it’s poetic like your writing, and so so beautiful. ā¤
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Oh boy, now I have lots of sand in my shoes, yes I came back watching her from the distance. Thanks for the journey. [Another unpaid ticket] :D.
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Hahaha, hopefully it wasn’t a strenous journey š
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So,so. Not easy, not difficult [if that makes sense].
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Wow! Ameena your writing is a thumbs up ā¤
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Haha, Thank you dear! š
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