The neighborhood was eerily quiet, with only a handful of people visible, going about their businesses. I was going to love moving here, I thought to myself. There was even a parking space reserved for me, ah, gone were the days of fighting with the neighbors over “my space, your space”.
A young fair-skinned man, dressed in jeans and a blue shirt hurried towards me, interrupting my thoughts.
“Sorry, for being late”, he said amidst breaths. He introduced himself as Mark, the real-estate agent and offered to help park my car properly while I checked out the house.
I had barely stepped inside the house, thinking what a generous person this Mark was, when the roar of a car driving off, alerted my attention. I hurried to find an empty parking space, my car gone, no sign of Mark and everyone else going about their businesses.
I was carless and nobody cared. Oh, how I missed my nosey neighborhood.
word count: 159. The above story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers photo prompt challenge, hosted by Priceless Joy. Thank you very much @Phylor for this week’s image.
OH no! He stole her car! Well, it was a great neighborhood until Mark showed up! LOL! Now her old neighborhood looks better than ever! Great story, Ameena!
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Haha, yup, Mark was the bad news. Thank you PJ.
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Oh wow! A great story.
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Thank you very much 😊
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A smile lit up my face when I saw a post from you! Missed ya girl! I guess nosy neighbors aren’t too bad compared to Mark, huh? 🙂
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Yay!!!! 😄 the feeling is mutual Joy. I sent you an email, but I’m not sure you’ve seen it while you were on your journey. I can see you are back. Hope you had a wonderful vacation?
Hahahaha,and yes, nosey neighbors beat the Marks’ types.
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nosy neighbors.. just loved reading this
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Thank y very much Akhila ☺️
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my pleasure Ameena
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ooooh. great and unique take, Ameena!
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Thank you very much Rosema 😊
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you’re very much welcome! 😀
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Ohhh no, I knew there was something fishy about that Mark! He’s a real estate agent (supposedly) not a valet :P!
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Hahaha, I know right?! She was so carried away with the beauty of the neighborhood that Mark found it easy to trick her.
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Proof that having a nosey neighbor can be an advantage sometimes. Wonderful story! 😊
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Hahahaha, yes it can be 😄. Thank you JC
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Wow unexpected Ameena. What a jerk, steeling her car. I can see how she missed her suburb neighbourhood.
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Interesting! How did Mark just show up and know that she was waiting for a realtor? Was she?
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“I was careless and nobody cared, the only one who cared stole my car”
Great story, sister! 😄
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Thank y very much Aisha 😄
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Beautiful start and mysterious climax that makes simply apart from others. Do you know that ?
Nice fiction . All the very best for your future write ups .
Keep sharing.
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Thank you very much, ❤️
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Maybe he was finding a better parking spot… 😀
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Hahaha, now that is one amazing theory. Who knows? Maybe… 😂
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Great story. Would be lovely if we could all be so trusting, but not in this world unfortunately.
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I know right, what a wonderful world it would be if trust went unbroken.
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Alway better the green green grass of home, then the green grass on the other side of the fence. Very well written.mike
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How did I miss this! Nice story!
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