I loved a boy once,
A grave mistake;
Gave him my heart,
Which he displaced;
He left a void,
I wrote to fill;
Heartbreak was one-
Poetry couldn’t heal.
I loved a boy once-
Recent history;
And patched his pieces,
At the expense of me;
He grew new wings,
I lost my grip;
He flew to places,
I needed fixing.
I loved a boy once-
Whom I couldn’t keep;
His word was the law,
I, a willing victim;
He showed me the stars,
And dimmed my flick;
He left a void-
I am writing to fill.
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The poem is so good, the expression, the feelings embedded in it- everything is so very good. I can relate to this, completely .
Keep writing ^_^ ♡ ♡
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Aww, thank you very much Sanskriti 😊. This is something I wrote a While back but finally decided to post it today. I’m so happy to hear you could relate too it 😀
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Oh,that’s a pleasure ^_^
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It’s relatable but that’s not what makes it so beautiful. It’s the way you’ve penned it down. Heart achingly beautiful this is Ameena. You are an angelic soul with a beautiful heart. Your writings reflect that. :’)
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What a coincidence! I just finished reading your post “dark diaries” when I saw your comment. Thank very much darling, I really appreciate the kind words. You are amazing for putting a smile on my face with your comment ❤️❤️
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I’m glad I made you smile. Your words usually do that to me. 🙂
Everything’s going to be beautiful, my pretty. Best wishes, always. ❤
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I love the never-give-up spirit here. Despite all the setbacks, she didn’t give up on love. Wonderful poem, Ameena. 😘
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Thank you Funsie 😊. I find that it takes great courage and a strong heart to still keep on loving despite set backs.
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I couldn’t agree more! ☺️ I read that your phone spoilt. Hope you get it fixed soon. 😊
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Thank you Funsie 😊. I’m planning to get it fixed by the weeken God willing.
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Very deep and sad and beautiful.
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Thank you very much Pj. I was hoping the rhyming words would lighten the heaviness a bit 😄
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I think that it did, Ameena, but didn’t distract from the meaning.
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Oh, Ameena. I love this. I’ve missed you and your posts. *hugs*
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Me too girl! I have missed yours, unfortunately I wouldn’t fully be back till next week. I Haven’t been feeling too good so, not written much plus my phone’s spoilt. But wil try and fix it soon .
Xoxo. ❤️
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Come back soon. We’ll all be waiting. And, feel better. Take care, sweetie.
xx ❤
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Thanks love 😘😘
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Yes, I hope you feel better soon:) I was just thinking how I missed visiting your blog. Your writing always captivates.
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Wonderful!
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Thank you very much Jahnavi 😊
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This post made me think back… there was a time when I used to feel the same way… But times heals the pain I guess… ❤ Lovely poem
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Time does heal or a some way, you get used to the pain that it doesn’t hurt anymore.
Thank you 😊. I’m glad reading this brought back some memories .
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I love this poem…a lot of meaning, with a few words. Sad, but beautiful.
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Thank you very much Jc 😊. I am glad you like it .
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This is amazing :*
Just like you are 😙
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Thank you girl! 😘😘
No, you are amazing!!
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Wonderful
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Thank you Izza 😄
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Oh gosh, a great write on such a familiar tale. May your next love be blessed 🙂
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Aww Thank you Azul ☺️. Ameen to that prayer! 😀
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🙂
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Beautifully written words, about love lost, and writing to fill the void.
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Thank you very much! 😄 We all have different ways of filling the void, I think one of the best is through writing. 🙂
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Yes for sure!
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Beautiful post. I’m sorry to read you had to go through this. Life is cruel sometimes.
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Thank you very much Nashrah. And oh,the poem really is an exaggeration on my part 😄
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beautiful poem sis! it takes time to heal the wounds 🙂 never regret anything ;they all comes to teach us something about life
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Thank you very much 😊. Time does heal or as some say, we get used to it.
I couldn’t agree more, wouldn’t change anything.
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So sad!! There is a Prince waiting for you, I just know it 🙂 Remember you gotta go to the ice cream shop, LOL! 🙂
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Hahaha, Thanks for the reminder Joy 😄.
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Beautiful :’)
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Thank you girl! Glad you like it. And hey, you also have “random” on you blog name 😄
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Haha.. Yeah! Same pinch 😀
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Ohhhhhh, the joy and struggles of human relationships. Especially the romantic hearts. I think most of us can relate to this finw work Ameena.
Great job.
😊💕
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Hahaha, oh yes! I have already accepted it as a rite of passage 😀
Thank you very much Stacy 😊
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Haha. Funny @right of passage.
😄
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Very beautifully written and most can relate to this. Expressed very nicely it touched me!
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Aww, I love it when I see someone can also relate! It makes me happy 😊 thank you very much Lynz.
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most welcome
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Love this poem. Powerful.
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Thank you very much Tikeetha 😊
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It takes a lot to try again and again.
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It does! It takes a strong heart to keep on trying 🙂
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Ameeeeeeeena!! Is there any other way to express this better??? I don’t think so!! I think this was soo beautiful that I seriously am in the verge of breaking down!! *Trying to breathe so that my parents don’t notice* I wish you were near so that I could give you a hug for writing this amazing piece of HISTORY! It’s toooo breath takingly amazing!! ❤ I am now I am gonna assume this was from experience atleast once, coz your poems reveal a pain… which is a pain only felt by one's in distress!! Even though I hope you never have.. I do feel that pain!! I can't stop myself frm noticing it! 😛
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Bestestestestest!!
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😘😘you are a dear!
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