“Where on earth is Nigel”
Frustrated, Maura sought refuge under the red umbrellas present at Lancaster lake. It wasn’t as much that the weather was hot but rather the sun rays melting her pancaked face which bothered her. She looked at her watch, 3:35pm, “Nigel better have a good reason for keeping me waiting”.
Just then, Maura noticed a ripple at the center of the waterbody. Her eyes widened as she realized splashes of water were erupting from the ripple. She took a few steps towards it when a floating box caught her eye.
At the top of the box was a banner on which was boldly written:
“I know you don’t like cheesy,
I’ll try to make this cool;
Sorry for keeping you waiting-
Maura please please say I do”
It was the worst poem Maura had ever read but even that didn’t stop the tears from flowing down her cheeks. She screamed at the top of her lungs to Nigel who appeared at the other side of the lake,
“I thought you’ll never ask!”
This post is In submission to the flash fiction for aspiring writers photo prompt challenge. Word count: 175 words. We are provided with a photo every week on which a story of 150 (give or take 25 words) is required. If you’d like to participate or read awesome flash fiction stories, just click on the link above. 🙂
Cool! I like this. I’m always fascinated with the different ways people propose.
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I know! I also love seeing the different and sometimes wierd ways people propose. Thank you 😊
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What a great proposal story! It was great when she said, “I thought YOU WOULD never ask!” Such a sweeet and touching story Ameena! 🙂
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Thank you very much Pj 😄.
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tsk tsk Maura, see how you got frustrated whilst Nig was planning what you wanted so much ;). I am waiting to see what is in store for the couple.
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Hahahha, not falling for it this time Noir :D. No more series for a while, bur thank you 🙂
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wayyyyyy, 😦 but I understand.
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I do like this post, excellent take on the prompt.
I have to apologise to you that when I went to reply to your comment for reasons unbeknown to me your comment vanished.
So thanks for reading mine, I appreciate you stopping by.
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Thank you very much.
Aw, its alright, no need for apologies 😊
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That’s so cool! 😀
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Haha, thank you Maya! W
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Awww. My favorite line is how that’s the worst poem ever. But makes for a good engagement story 😉
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Thank you very much..haha,ove makes us blind to things like worrible poems. 😀
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OH this made me SMILE 🙂 Love creative proposals! Good job!
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Hahaha, thank you Joy 😘
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I loved reading it.. The very end where she sees ripples from the lake to when she says I thought you’ll never ask is so beautiful. Heartfelt and romantic 😍
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Thank you very much 😊. Awww, i appreciate the comment ❤
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Much love ❤
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