Ŵhen love leaves,
Silence becomes defeaning,
You see things, all too clearly
That happy couple holding hands,
It takes you back- back- to a time when
Sweet words and morning jokes were a norm
When fights didn’t mean the end but,
One of those things that happen.
Until, the unannounced
Arrives- death
And love has to leave.
I’d like to turn this into a longer poem, but it’s late at night and I’m drinking tea, thinking of sleep and dreading another morning class tomorrow. 🙂
Avril Lavigne lyrics! Blast from the past. Those lyrics are from one of my favorite songs by her.
Your poem is nicely done 🙂
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I know right?! It reminds me of someone from the past. Thank you Jade 😊
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This is beautiful. You could write another poem tomorrow, maybe about a couple drinking tea?
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Haha, that’s an excellent idea 😄. Thank you.
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🙂
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Great poem! LOL about your last words saying how you wish you could turn it into a longer poem…..Yum on the tea, yuck on the early morning class. Good luck 😉
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Thank you Joy 😄… Tomorrow is not am early morning one so yay!!
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Love this! You are such a great writer!
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Thank you very much Batool… I appreciate your comment and kind words 😊
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No problem 😊
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Love the great mystery we all want to know better.
Well done, Ameena. Late night writes seem to be the best ones.
Isadora 😎
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Exactly! Especially the ones right when it’s time to sleep. Thanks Isadora, I appreciate you hanging out at my blog today. 🙂
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Cheers to rememberance and healing. When such memory is no longer painful. Just a memory.
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