“Why the forlorn face?” Inquired Adolf, the loved-up cow.
“Well“, began Amber, the flowered cow. “It’s just that everyone’s hovering around you and admiring your intricately designed flowers and hearts.“
“I could say the same about you Amber“, Protested Adolf “and You look lovely all flowered up”.
Amber being one not to give up, continued, “but that’s Just it. I might look lovely but you look stunning. Heck, you even have a little peace inscribed on your ear“.
She pouted while Adolf sighed, thinking to himself that Amber could be tough at times. Just then, some kids came towards them screaming,
“Look! That one painted with hearts looks like a Piñata”
Quickly, the rest of the gang grabbed a stick each and headed for Poor Adolf. Amber chuckled like anything, saying
“on a second thought, I like my flowers”.
word count: 139 words. This story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspirng Writers photo prompt challenge, hosted by Priceless Joy. Thank you very much @Swritings for this week’s stunning photo.
P.S: constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated.
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Those intricately painted flowers had hearts are admirable.. But a piñata?No…I think the all flowery one is more like a piñata that will burst with candies 😉
Flowers have always been my favorite ! Great story 🙂
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Hahaha, Amber would have been delighted to hear you prefer her and her flowers to Adolf’s hearts.
And I say, flowers can break your heart 😉. Thanks Hargun
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Flowers can break heart….well, I wish nobody gets a first hand experience at that 😉
You are welcome Ameena. That was a lovely story 🙂
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Hahaha, I hope so too! 😊 Thank you
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Very creative in a flash ! Mooo – like!
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Hehe, thank you very much 😊
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The colours.
This was fun to read,I think I liked all these types of posts! 😀
I see my flag. ❤ Pakistan!
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Haha, yeah there it is on both cows 😄. Thanks! Glad you like it
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Yep! 🙂 welcome. 😀
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That is really creative and adorable! I love cows!
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Thank you Ariana! 😄haha, Its great to hear I wrote on something you like.
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The the forlorn face was a precursor of things to come aka the pinata , LOL.
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Hahaha. Yess it was 😄
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Chuckling:D be comfortable in your own skin it says to me. Creative and lovely!
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Hahaha, me too! 😄thank you for your comment
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Hahahaha! I would prefer to have the flowers too than be beaten with a stick! At least it stopped her whining. LOL!! Cute story, Ameena!!
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Me too Pj! 😄 me too. atleast it did. Thank you
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I especially loved the pinata reference 🙂
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Thank you Azul. But poor Adolf 😂
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Yes… 🙂
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Very funny that the kids would think Adolf was a pinata, and started hitting him. I guess Amber is the winner and the end, because the kids won’t be beating her. I’m not sure I would use the name Adolf. I think it’s one of those names ruined forever by Hitler 😦 Great story though.
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In the End, Amber is the winner! She escaped a pinata beating. Thank you Mandi. I agree with you about the Hitler thing. I thought-out Rudolf at first. But didn’t want him being confused with a reindeer.
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you personified the cows and yeah! it is soooooo adorable! ❤ great job Ameena!
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Thank you Rosema! Haha, well the cows are actually cute! 😄
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Oh dear.
Poor fellow.
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Hahah, poor fellow indeed 😄
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Ha! A wake up call for Adolf that he should be happy of who he is a not so focused on someone else. Great story.
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Exactly! thank you JC 😊
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LOL! Very cute story:) I would not want to be the one that looks like a pinata either:p
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Thank you Nena 😄. Hahah, me neither
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Hahaha! So Amber got the last laugh 🙂 Poor Adolf! So creative!! I remember my girls banging on pinatas at their birthday parties, but have to say we never had such a pretty cow be one 🙂
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In the end, Amber did! 😄 haha, it really is a pretty cow.
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