You held me,
But I am still standing,
You tied me,
But I’m still walking,
You drowned me,
But I breathe under water,
You can break me,
But my pieces would suffice me.
You whisper-
When darkness surrounds me,
Like a coward,
Hiding whilst there’s lighting.
You create-
Illusions around me,
Unaware-
My Lord’s, all the light I need.
You can hold me,
But I’ll still be standing,
You can break me,
My pieces would suffice me.
this is so amazing, your words brings a important message…enjoy reading it
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Awww, thank you so very much. Words have power they say.
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And again too powerful, for me to add anything to it! <3!
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Awww, thank you very much Joy. I am So happy with the response to this poem. Want expecting it
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It’s an intense and bold piece. Loved it. Encouraging! ^_^
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Awww, thank you very much! I feel passionately about it. Fall 10 times, rise 11
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True that girl! That’s the spirit. š
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Powerful and inspiring.
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Thank you very much. I’m glad I could inspire
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A great poem showing strength and resistance.
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Thank you very much J.C. I believe in hope and try to reflect it as much
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You are too good Ameena in this post.
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Thank you very much Nisthur, I appreciate you reading and commenting
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This is so inspiring..
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Thank you very much Hiba. I am glad to hear you are inspired by this little piece. That’s huge for me
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beyond excellent!
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Aww, Thank you very much Zora š
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Your blog inspires me to keep writing. Your poetry empowers and teaches me so much. Sometimes reminding me of things I’d forgot I even knew. So thank you ~
For being so consistent and for sharing your light with the world, your words āØ
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Beautiful!
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Thank you very much šš
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My pleasure š
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Very inspiring..i love how you ended with the beginning.
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Thank you very much. I love writing in circles š
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profondā¦beautiful piece š
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Aww, thank you very much š
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