We queued towards the Egypt Air terminal, the air hostess’ voice hovering in the atmosphere, signifying the commencement of boarding for flight E365. Within seconds it seemed, suitcases crashed to the ground, and everyone headed towards one direction- the exit.
The counter clerks were a sight; trying to climb their way over counter tables but their skirts weren’t making it easy an easy task, which thinking back now, made for a funny sight.
We all ran, pushing, scratching and wanting to beat whoever or whatever it was making us run. It wasn’t until we were safely at a distance and out of breath that the question- “what happened?” arose, everyone looking at one another in a quizzical manner.
Long hours of interview and investigation by airport officials eventually revealed the source of the drama. A young lad, whose phone ringtone happened to be “gunshots”, rang incredible loudly and we were the chain reaction that followed. And the man who began it all, he was also amongst the panicked not knowing he was the source.
word count: 174 words. This is in response to flash fiction for aspiring writers photo Prompt challenge. Unfortunately, due to a horrible internet connection and busy exam schedules, I wasn’t able to make it in time to link my story for last week’s challenge. The internet just got back today, so since I had already written, I thought I’d share the story regardless. 🙂 Thank you very much @Dawn Miller for this week’s photo.
Great story – I was captivated!!
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Thank you very much. I am glad you were.
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I can’t imagine why he thought a gunshots ringtone would be a good idea in the first place! Great creative take on the photo Ameena 🙂
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I know right?! Gunshots ringtone us never a good thing 😂. And welcome back from your break. I hope you and the muse stick around this week much 😊
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Aww thanks Ameena! Feels great to be back ^_^
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Great story, it made me chuckle that he got so caught up in it that he didn’t realise he was the cause 🙂
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Haha, I’m glad it did! 😄😄 Thank you
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Great use of the prompt! It’s such a “today” thing! We are so geared toward the unexpected and have a tendency to jump to conclusions and react immediately . That’s not such a bad thing because it could save our life some day. Wonderful story!🙌
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I suppose I’d also be amongst the runners if I were in their shoes too 😄, so yes, not always a bad thing. Thank you JC
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Hey, great piece! 🙂
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Thanks Beatrice 😄
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Methinks he needs to be a bit wiser in his ringtone choices. The whistle may be annoying, but it never caused a stampede. 🙂
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Hahaha, me thinks the the same thing too 😂😂. So many ringtones to choose from and he had to pick gunshots?!
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😀
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