You asked the question,
Here’s my reply-
I cant tell you why those men-
Broke you that night;
can’t tell you why your mother,
Drunk herself mad;
can’t take back the childhood,
That destroyed your life;
can’t shut out the voices,
That’s screaming aloud;
Can’t make you believe in-
The body you have;
Can’t force off the blade from-
Your hands every night.
Can’t tell you to get over it-
That’s not right;
But together we’ll get through it-
That’s my pact;
Together we’ll sit through,
The dark till it’s bright;
I’ll bind up the wrists till-
You needn’t do that;
We’ll seek help together-
And wade through setbacks;
Together we’ll make it and
Don’t ask me why?
I love you my girl and
Believe in the lines-
Even broken wings
Can still learn to fly.
Originally written 24/August/2014
This is truly awesome. β€
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Aw, thank you so much Dan π
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Beautiful… π
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Thank you Georgette π
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So beautiful π
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Aw, thank you very much π
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Love it! So beautiful. π
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Thanks! I appreciate it π π
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This is so beautiful and says so much, so much about a girl that has inner pain which needs to surface so the healing light will heal. So many of us have these pains that need to come to the surface to be healed. You are speaking for all of us. Thank you.
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Kay, I recently came across a site here on WP that I started following, “Poetreecreations.org.” They highlight other people’s poetry on their blog and they have an enormous following. If you don’t already know about them, try checking them out.
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Thanks PJ π i actually do follow them but I have no idea how the site works. But thank you for the suggestion, i will try to check them out later and see. π
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OH girl you did just have to make me tear up again didn’t you!! Beautiful job!
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Oh my! β€ β€ Awww Joy, haha, I didn't mean to π . And thank you so much! π
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So beautiful…
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Thanks Nimmi π
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VERY POWERFUL! GAVE ME THE CHILLS!
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Oh My! Thank you so much β€
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You really have an extra-ordinary way of putting put poems. read a few and all are so much thoughtful. They are deep…
Congratulations… keep writing.. π
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aw,Thank you Prakash for taking the time to read them, really I appreciate it :D. And Autocorrect, it happens to me all the time π
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Pleasure is all mine! π
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*out
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Incredibly beautiful, filled with wonderful compassion.
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Thank you very much Sir
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My god, beyond awesome and amazing! This post is moving and powerful at times!
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Awww Thank you shivangi! I love reading your comments
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This post is moving and powerful at the same time Ameena! Great workπ
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Sooo beautiful β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Hehe… Thank you
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Hey you wrote this? It feels like you know my life and are talking to me! Lol…. great work! βΊ
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Hahaha, thank you very much Karen π
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you’re welcome! π
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This is truly beautiful and heartwarming.
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Thank you very much!
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