Of all who offered me their hearts,
Its yours I want to take;
Of all who peeked into my life,
It’s you I want to stay;
It’s you I chose, It’s you I asked-
It’s you who turned away.
Maybe, that’s the price to pay,
For those I turned away.
Today, I am feeling “Lang Leavy”, hence the poem above.
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Really love this one Ameena, and I can well imagine that so many readers will be able to relate at a personal level. Great job. I am so pleased that I follow your Blog!
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Thank You very much Colin, I really appreciate it. You know, I actually wrote this one old school, pen- paper style ๐
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Perhaps your thought process is a little different when not hitting keys? ๐
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I think so. And i’m going to start writing more with pen and paper just to see how it goes
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beautifully written
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Thank you very much ๐
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this is short and sweet and I love it so much
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Thank you very much Jen ๐
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beautiful
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Thank you ๐
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What a wonderful poem, Ameena!! I love this! ๐
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Awww, thank you very much ๐
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Lovely one. A lot of strong emotions in there.
Really loved it.
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Thank you very much. I am glad you loved it, as this isnt my usual writing style ๐
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damn i loved that. so simple short and to the point yet so powerful! beautiful
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Thank you very much Hudaal. i appreciate it.
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Your way with words continues to be amazing sweet friend!
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Thank you very much Joy. ๐๐
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A wonderful poem! Enjoyed it. ๐
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Thank you very much JC. I am glad to hear it ๐
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great poem
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Thank you very much
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beautiful expression.
thanks for follow my blog.:-) happy blogging !!!
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I’m just starting to blog and your the first one I followed and looking forward to read more of your works and so far I’m enjoying it ๐.
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Thank you very much and welcome to the blogging world. You’d love it here
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