D.I Lucy strode into the cordoned off section of the beach, lifting the yellow tape to get across. The urgent call had come right as she was about to brew her morning coffee. She didn’t get to make it and was positively irritated, made all the more worse by the huge smile spread across her partner D.S Fenworthy’s face. Who smiles at a crime scene?
Fenworthy had arrived the beach ahead of Lucy and waved her to the site, where two boats rested. He handed her a plastic cup with black coffee. She was grateful, but irked by his morning joy, decided not to show it.
“So, what do we have?” She asked, surveying the scene and making sure not to trample on anything.
“Two boats“, he began, “all geared up for journey but with no sign of travel. The renters have been missing, no one saw anything”.
D.I Lucy looked bored, “and they dumped the case on our homicide unit, why?”
“The boss specifically requested us”. He paused, “One of them is his daughter”.
word count: 175 words. This post in response to a Flash Fiction for Aspiring writers photo prompt challenge, where each week we are provided with a picture to write a 75-175 word story surrounding it. Thank you very much for this week’s picture @tj Paris.
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Whose jurisdiction is it? Love take on a common policing problem.
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Thank you very much 😄
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Cool! Love the surprise ending.
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Haha. A surprise was what I was hoping to evoke. Thank you
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Uh Oh! They will have to work carefully since it is the boss’s daughter! Hope they find them alive and well! Great story, Ameena!
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Yes they will PJ. And he’d be on their necks with the case since it’s person. Thank you. Glad you like it
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OH love the Dramatic twist you put at the end there. Its like you could hear everything going silent all of a sudden!
I also enjoy Lucy not being a morning person. 🙂
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Hahahaha. You’re not the only one on that Joy. Fenworthy on the other hand I think would be the opposite😁
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Yes he is like my hubby! All chipper as I just give him morning stare! LOL!
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Hahahaha. I have a friend like that too. My sister is the complete opposite. 😂😂
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Whoa that ending! I wonder what was the reason behind Det. Fenworthy’s cheery attitude! Good one, Ameena!
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Lucy and I have one thing in common – definitely not a morning person! 😀😀😀
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Hahaha. I think he is just a morning person either that, or he is smiling because he knows Lucy hates the morning s
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😂😂😂😂
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Haha, thank you! A surprise was what I was hoping to evoke.
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Oooh you set up an interesting mystery Ameena! And the boss’ daughter is missing? Oh dear…
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Haha. Thank you Jade 😄😄.
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A great story! I was surprised with the ending. I’m sure they will work very hard to solve the case and should feel honored that they were given the case to work on…..their boss must think highly of them to trust them with a case he is so closely connected to!
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Their boss knows that they are the best in what they Do. I think it will be a tough case, but they will pull through.
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I love your flash fictions!! I hope to read more of your work!😁
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Hi Ashley! Thank you very much. I’m glad you like them 😄
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A morning person in the homicide unit– Interesting. Great work!
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Thank you very much 😄
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I got so into it, didn’t expect that ending !
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Haha, I’m so glad to hear it! 😄
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