“Girl! You’ve got some serious screws lose.”
“He was such a fine specimen.”
“You know you’re making a mistake right.”
“She sure is! What were you thinking, saying no to him.”
Layla stared blankly, hoping her evident disinterest in their monologues would get them to stop talking; it wasn’t working.
“Are you even listening to what we’re saying”,
“We’re trying to help you out here, you know”.
Layla gave a loud sigh, then turned to face them,
“Why“, she said.
They stared at her, lack of understanding, evident on their faces.
“Did it occur to you, to ask me why I said no to him?”
Silence filled the room. She got up and smiled wearily,
“That’s what I thought.”
Layla pointed through the window at the narrow steep pathway, guarded by green shrubs on all sides, which led to up to the hill.
“That’s where I’ll be when you’re all done,” she added before heading out. Their murmurs of “you’re not getting any younger you know,” following her out the door.
Word count: 171 words. This story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writer’s photo prompt challenge, hosted by Priceless Joy, where each week we are provided a picture and are to write a 75-175 word story inspired by it. Thank you very much for this week’s photo @JS Brand.
Wow! Thought-provoking topic. We never ask why someone said no to the guy everyone thinks to be perfect.
By the way good entry for the photo prompt challenge.
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Thank you very much. It was tough to write in this. But I am glad I did.
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Oohh so much more to this story…..
I applaud Layla for standing up for herself. Walking away, until they are ready to listen!
Great job!
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I hope they will be ready. I think it will take a lot more walking away 😄
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Wow…so beautiful and well thought..well done..
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Thank you very much 😊
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Good for Layla for walking away from that conversation! She may not be getting any younger but she certainly should be able to make up her own mind! Great story, Ameena!!
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I agree! Thank you very much PJ.
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wow – powerful title – great reflection…
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Thank you very much. It was actually tough to come with a title for this 😂
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A wonderful story that many can relate to. People think they know what is best for others, but without really finding out why they made the decision they did.You can know a person …on the surface…but to really know them, you must be in the shoes of the one that knows them best. Discovering the real truth about a person…gives one a chance to make a better decision about them.
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I can visualise one vexed mama and daughter conversation. When someone says no, it’s better not to force it.
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I absolutely agree. So much harm can come from forcing such a huge decison. Thank you ma for the comment.
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My pleasure Ameena
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