I remember when your tiny hands,
Found their home in mine,
With your body resting lightly,
In between my arms,
The rush each night for more milk,
And the tricks to quieten your cries,
I remember it like yesterday,
The day- you became mine.
And the first time you said mama,
When your feet first hit the floor,
Your first tooth and first tooth gap,
My Jaan I remember it all,
When you said you hated purple,
And we fought at the toy store,
How you’d make up, saying I love you,
My Jaan I remember it all.
But they say it is impossible,
Those nine months’ all that count,
They cannot call me a mother,
Since my womb was not your house.
But I’d give up the “mum” title,
To still have you in my life.
And as great of a job, is birthing,
so is raising a child.
So true being a good loving parent is deeper than biology alone.
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I absolutely agree! Thank you for the comment
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well said
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Thank you 😄
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This is a beautiful piece. 💕
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Thank you very much Sanskriti
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Wonderful job portraying the emotion that one would feel raising a child that is not their own. I believe my own mother would deeply resonate with this poem, as she and my father have now adopted two children. They are as much ours as they would have been if she had birthed them herself.
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Thank you very much Matthew. Oh wow, that is amazing. I have always wanted to adopt too, although of course, the decision had to be made by two of us.
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Well, of course! It’s a beautiful thing to be a part of changing someone else’s life for the better. 🙂
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This is very beautiful.
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Aww, thank you very much
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Feeling the love this Mom has for her child in this poem! Awesome poem, my friend has a adopted son for they could not have children, she would love this poem1 So true!
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Thank you Joy! I’ve always loved the idea of adoption and hopefully someday (of course there’s still many decisions to be made before that) I Would love to adopt too.
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Beautifully expressed
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Thank you very much Sir 😄
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This almost brought me to tears as I read it thinking of my own mom. I have no words for this, Ameena, except bravo. Simply wow.
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Awwwww, thank you so much Jade. 💕💕💕
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As a mom..this melts my heart dear..i got here through Jade and i am thankful to see you here…
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Aww. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it 😄😄
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Beautiful, lovely written
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Thank you very much
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My god this is beautifully written
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Thank you very much 😊
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This is precious!
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Thank you very much ☺️
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Very very true. Even though one did not birth a child, they are still the mother if raising them.
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Absolutely! I couldnt agree more
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beautiful 🙂
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Thank you very much. I have a soft spot for mothers
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