If I poured my soul in verses,
And stamped it in hearts,
Sent it to the places,
You lived since we parted,
Would you look back
For a moment,
At the memories we had,
The good and the bad,
With my words in your mind.
Would you take down the ring,
From the shelf it’s been standing,
Take a look at the pictures,
Of the babies we are having,
Would you look down your hand,
With my memories beside you,
Gaze at your fingers,
Knowing something is missing.
If I told you I’m sorry,
And we miss you in our family,
Would you give us a chance,
Or would you still leave me hanging.
If I poured my soul in verses,
And stamped them in hearts,
To bring back our family,
Would those words suffice…
Love this one….very heartfelt.
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Thank you very much J.C ☺️☺️
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Very moving!!
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Thank you Joy 😄
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This is beautiful
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Thank you very much 😊😊❤
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😊❤
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wow – amazing words…your lines is powerful – like a melody…
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Awww, thank you very much. I had missed writing in rhymes and decided to pursue it once again. Glad you like it
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so powerful!!!!
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Thank you very much Jodi
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Once again! Well done! Have you considered submitting to PresserPoets yet? We’d love to have you contribute your art to our website. Let me know. 🙂
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Thank you very much Matthew. I have considered it and even sent J a message. I actually across it via your blog. Right now I’m contemplating on which poems to send 😂😂
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Awesome!!! Send them all! You have wonderful work, and I’d love to see it plastered all over the site!
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I would try to send it as soon. All the best with the new website.
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Awesome!!!
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As always very touching, sensitive and beautiful Ameena. Also very sad.
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Thank you very much Deb. It is a sad situation. Wondering
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You’re most welcome. Yes it is, very sad.
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Aww this is so beautiful 😢😍
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Thank you very much Batool ☺️☺️☺️
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Ohhh Ameena, this is wonderful! It’s touching and hopeful, we always wonder if we should give others a second chance…and this poem perfectly puts into words the hesitation and the hope of such a decision.
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Thank you very much Jade! I think that’s one of the hardest things to do, wondering if a person deserves a second chance or not.
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Love this Ameena!
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Thank you very much miss T. I’m glad you do 😄😄
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Reblogged this on Raniquezoria Works and commented:
This is a really great poem! LOVE IT!
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Thank you very much for the reblog, I appreciate it 😄
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