“Are we there yet?”, Jamie’s voice shot up.
“Not yet honey, we only just began like five minutes ago”. His mother replied.
A few steps up the rocky hill, Andrea’s voice shot up,
“We there yet?”
“No love, still got some way to climb, okay?” The mother replied as patiently as she could get her voice to sound.
Five minutes passed in peace with only their crunching footsteps disturbing the sound of Mother Nature when Aaliyah spoke up,
“Mum?”
Their mother paused in her tracks and faced Aaliyah with such an intense look, little Aaliyah cowered, her gaze downwards and muttered,
“I only wanted to know if I may have some water please.”
Laughter erupted from both Andrea and Jamie because they were pretty sure that wasn’t reason. But as long as mama was consoled, they kept their mouth shut.
Their mother sighed, beginning to regret ever offering to take them on a hiking trip. She placed her hands on her barely visible bump and said,
“You, better behave once you come out.”
Word count: 173. The above story is in response to flash fiction for aspiring writers photo prompt challenge, where each week we are provided with an image and are to write a 75-175 word story in it. Thank you @Pamela S. Canepa for this week’s photo.
LOL! She is already threatening the unborn baby! Cute story Ameena!
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Hahahah she is! Thank you PJ. 😊
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A wonderful story.
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Thank you very much
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uuuhhhuuuh. that last line is tooo cute. i hope they will hike safely. may the baby be healthy! 🙂
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, i think they will. But with multiple unintended stops in between. 😂
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oops. at least. hehe. 😀
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Nice and simple! 🙂
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Thank You Nitin 😄
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Lovely tale!
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Thank you very much 😊
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Aww… 🙂🙂🙂 That’s too cute! Better behave lil one.
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Hahaha, he better do ! Thanks Maria
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Haha. This sounds like my family. Save that within five minutes of hiking, we’ve used up all the bandages we brought because of falls and scrapes. 😀
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Hahaha. So glad you could relate to this story Russ 😄😄
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So cute, so real to life! The frustration and calmness is quite evident in your writing. Ha! Ha! the expression on ones face can speak volumns sometimes. Love this story. 🙂
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This is cute. Nicely done.
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Thank you very much. 😊
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Ha. Fat chance.
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