D.S Fenworthy looked at the images rolling on the screen and sure enough, the little girl wearing a pink hoodie was Sarah. Her hair was much darker now but that was definitely her- a girl who had gone missing two months ago at a supermarket whilst her mother was shopping. One minute she was there and the next, gone.
“boss! Boss!“, Fenworthy yelled across the office.
D.I Lucy hurried to his cubicle, unhappy to have her lunch break uninterrupted.
“This better be worth it..”, she began when Fenworthy interjected by pointing at a screenshot of Sarah.
“Isn’t that?”
Fenworthy nodded and D.I Lucy dumped her half eaten sandwich into the trash. He played the tape in slow motion which showed Sarah standing on the platform as the train approached, but the moment it passed, she was gone, again.
“We can’t lose her again” Lucy declared, “Gather everyone together, fast. A little girl is missing and this is our first real clue. Time is ticking. We need to get Sarah back home.”
Word count: 171 words. this story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring writers Photo prompt challenge. Each week we are provided with a picture and are to write a 75-175 word story on it. Thank you @Yinglan for providing us with this week’s picture.
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Yes, get her home!! 🙂 Part 2 please 😉 The Happy Reunion!
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Hahaha, sorry Joy, this one is going to be a standalone 😄😄😄
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Not fair!! 🙂
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Great story Ameena! It kept me on the edge of my seat. I sure hope they find her.
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I believe they will. Detectives Lucy and Fenworthy are excellent at their job, thank you pJ
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Ohhh this is exciting! Wonderfully written, such energy and suspense Ameena!! What’s going to happen next?
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A very good story giving a lot of tension and anxiety as well as hopes of them being able to rescue Sarah. It also makes the reader wanting to know more about the child and how they go about finding her. It’s a relief to know that she is still alive and I can imagine how her family will feel when they receive the news that she has been seen.
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I’m already hooked! Haha
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Yay! I’m glad to hear that
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Ohhh what happened next? Please let there be a second part!
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Hahah, glad you think it deserves a part two Shweta. Sorry, I think this one would stay as a stand alone,
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Oh…now what?!
Going Home
Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~
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Now, the detectives do the best they can to get the little girl back home 😄
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Ahh, I hope they save Sarah!! This made me think of a Criminal Minds episode, and I can just imagine Penelope Garcia click-clacking on her laptop, determined to find Sarah. Great story, Ameena!
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Ohhhh yesss. It’s so sad to see so many of the original casts gone. But oh well, at least we’ve got reed still right? 😁😁 thanks Jade.
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Yesss Reid ❤ Oh, were you a fan of Beyond Borders, the spin off? I actually really liked it and I'm still so sad that it's been cancelled 😦
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part 2! part 2! part 2!!! 😀 love this, Ameena!! ❤ ❤ ❤ gripping!
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Very nice. But, inquiring minds want to know, what sandwich was she eating? 😀
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