She grew up with laughter,
At the dinner table,
Holding hands across the street,
Kind of parents-
She was that kid with pink ribbons,
Daddy’s doll;
He was that kid- a replica of
hand me downs,
Wiping mama’s tears and cleaning
After papa’s mess,
He was that kid with barely average
On every test;
Life after dusk brought women-
Drowned in assortments;
Men elated for the peace at home.
Kids cradled- by soft hands
who’ve not experienced,
The touch of labour,
neither it’s sweat.
Life after dusk brought on a stench,
The kids knew too well;
An image they wish-
They could forget.
Life after dusk is different-
In every household,
Some build sweet memories,
Some dim the lights
Of Children, and their innocence.
I love the various scenes you painted of life after dusk. It somehow made me think of Leo Tolstoy’s line in Anna Karenina about how every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way. Every family is different when the sun goes down.
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Every family is indeed different. That’s actually what I wanted to depict. Thank you Jade
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Oh Ameena!! This was sooo good! So well written.
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Thank you Joy! I’m glad you like it
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This was lovely Ameena. Such a close glimpse of life. Brilliant !!
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Thank you very much chhaya for the comment. 😊😊
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Pleasure was all mine Ameena 😊
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So sad. Well done
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Thank you Jodi 😊
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You have swing between two emotions so swiftly in this one! 🙂 Beauty!
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Thank you Prakash 😄
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Such contrast. Life after dusk is indeed different. Beautifully described. Well done, Ameena.
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Thank you very much Shweta, it is indeed different for every household.
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Yes. And you captured multiple scenes brilliantly! Keep writing, dear 😊
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Exceptionally well written
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Thank you very much 😊. I appreciate it.
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It is always my pleasure
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