Hope took my hand
And said-
Let’s walk a while,
At first I was unsure.
It subtly webbed,
Our fingers-
I couldn’t, them, retract.
With the sound of just,
My heart thumps-
We walked for miles at length.
I tried to slip,
It held me back;
Without making a sound.
Hope took my hand,
Whilst despair,
Was wrapped around my arms.
It gently made
It’s way until,
Despair could not abound.
Hope took my hand,
We walked a while,
And that’s made all the difference.
Really nice, the last verse especially good 🙂
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Oh this is so beautiful!
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Thank you very much 😄 😄
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You’re welcome!
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Hope took my hand,
We walked a while,
And that’s made all the difference.
That stanza sent my heart soaring. It’s exceptionally powerful.
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Thank you very much Jade. I’m glad to hear that 😄😄
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Love it!
And I agree about that last stanza, perfect ending!
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Thank you Joy! You are not alone there regarding the last stanza 😊
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I love this! And the series.
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Thank you very much. I’m glad you like this series. I thought it’d be stressful but I am actually enjoying it. 😁
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Good!
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beautiful!
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Thank you Jodi 😊
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This is beautiful 🙂
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Thank you. 😊
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This is so lovely ♡
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Thank you! I appreciate it. Glad you like it.
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Ameena I always love your work you are very talented and appreciated here xo
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Beautifully intricate! Thank you for sharing and feel free to checkout my website sometime. https://inspirehope109.wordpress.com
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Ah, another beautful piece, Ameena.. ❤
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Thank you very much Maria 😄
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Ameena….this is so beautiful and so full of hope ! Thanks for sharing.
Much love,
Chhaya ❤
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Thank you very much Chhaya. The pleasure is mine for having readers who take the time to read them.
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You are a beautiful generous soul Ameena ! It’s a pleasure to connect with you. Sending you peace and love ❤
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Love this, it’s so beautiful, just like the author, has beauty and strength in abundance. This is just what I needed today xoxo
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Thank you very much Dave, I really do appreciate the time you took to read my poems and leave thoughtful comments under. Take care and may thia bring lots of happiness to you and yours.
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Thank you Ameena, wonderful and thoughtful live long and prosper my new friend xoxo
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Hope is so important. I think it goes well with the word, ‘tenacity’.
Lovely Ameena.
🙂 ❤
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Thank you very stacy. It is one of the most important. Hope you have a wonderful week ahead. 💕
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You also have a wonderful week Ameena.
🙂 ❤
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Walk with hope, makes the absolute difference! Very nice one.. 🙂
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Indeed it does Prakash, and I have learnt that. Thanks
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every words….awesome!
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