Silence blankets the room,
I see your pale feet,
Hanging,
From a gloved hand-
Silence blankets the room.
Joy washes over me-
9 months of weight,
18 hours of- my God-
Torturous pain,
Relief washes over me, but
Silence blankets the room.
A life- I have carried a life,
A symbol- of my other half,
A sign- we were meant to be,
My baby- I see his feet
But-
Silence blankets the room.
Silence blankets the room,
Seconds turn to minutes,
My baby’s chest-
Doesn’t move,
His voice- goes unheard,
Eyes…
It dawns on me as,
Silence blankets the room.
Towards the end of last year, i did six weeks of obs and gynae shift. I saw Joy, pain and loss. I remember a patient who was in the hospital from 9am to around 7pm who was in labour, with the knowledge that the baby was dead. I can’t even imagine the strength it takes to go through the pain of childbirt, knowing the baby within has no heartbeat. And my sister (also a medical student) saw a similar case, and this time, it was actulaly triplets, To lose three kids all at the same time… For me, these women are survivors.
The beautiful image above is courtesy of Pinterest/ Anything will do
Nice to see you on this challenge Ameena, a touching post, really poignant. Hope you can check out my efforts too. Good luck, Iain
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HI Iain. I didn’t know you were participating. Going to check it out now. And thank you
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So very sad ☹️
Excellent writing though…
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Thank you very much Jessica. 😊
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oh. the way you write. the repetition is so effective. so heart rending. so beautiful!
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Thank you very Much Rosema. Recently, I am falling in love with repetitive lines.
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and you make them work so well. ❤ ❤ ❤
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That’s such a touching tale, Ameena. It’s heartbreaking but beautiful. Such a sad but deeply moving tale.
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Thank you very much Shweta 💕💕
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oh dear… a heartbreaking piece.. i can’t even begin to imagine the pain those mothers must have felt. sigh. ❤
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Thank you very Maria, it really is unimaginable until experienced. And even then, to Each is different.
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So true.. sigh. ❤
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A beautiful poem Ameena and it really made me cry, it was so deep. The words were from your heart and feel so sorry for these people who lose their children in child birth.
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Thank you very much Kamal. I am touched and it means a lot to me. It really is heartbreaking 💕
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Yes absolutely Ameena can so agree with your post. Life and its moments.
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Beautiful writing, which feels strange to say considering how saddening it is 🙂
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Thank you very much 😄 . It’s really sad 😔
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Such a touching composition Ameena. I agree, these brave women are true survivors!
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Thank you very much Radhika 💕.
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That definitely is a horrible pain. (Was sad to read about triplets).
Your poem captures the emotion very well. This is a very meaningful dedication.
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It is indeed, one which demands exceptional patience. Thank you
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Heartbreaking.
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It really is 😔. Thanks for the comment
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I don’t think there is anything that rips at me more than tragedies that happen to children – whether baby or older. A beautifully tragic poem. You did well.
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It really is the worst. Thugs at the heart. Thank you very much Russell. 😊
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Beautifully written, poignant and sad. Have a wonderful week.
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Thank you very much. And you as well., ❤
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Nothing quite prepares you for dealing with this. There IS usually noise, both during and after the labour. There are usually howls of suffering followed by squeals of joy. But in this process there is suffering (often silent as well) followed by sobs of grief. It IS heartbreaking.
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OH MAN!! My heart aches for those women!! You wrote a beautiful tribute to their pain! I can only imagine how hard that was for you to witness as well, due to your tender heart. But your tender heart is what is going to make you such a wonderful Dr!! <3!
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I know Joy. It was really heartbreaking. Aww thank You. I pray I can be that.
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