The piano was bundled up and sent for forensics with an “urgent” note attached to it. Meanwhile, D.I Lucy and her new Partner, D.S Fenworthy surveyed the crime scene.
“What’s your take?”
D.S Fenworthy replied without missing a beat, “never have I seen the crime scene of a horrific bloody murder without even a speck of dirt.”
“The killer cleans up nicely huh?” Jumped in Lucy.
“I’ll say.” Replied Fenworthy, shuddering inwards. “It was a bloody kill. The coroner estimates, the victim should have lost over 3 pints of blood, if not more from injuries she sustained.”
“and not a drop is present here for the CSI to work on,” concluded Lucy.
They both looked around in silence at the spotless parlour, until D.S fenworthy finally uttered what they both feared,
“you think it’s him again, boss?”
“well, we haven’t received a package yet, which is his signature, so“, She shrugged, sounding hopeful.
Just then, a voice called from outside,
“Boss, we found a package”.
D.S Lucy shuddered at the thought of its contents.
Word count: 173. The above story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers photo prompt challenge hosted by priceless Joy, where each week we are given an image and are to write a 75-175 word story in it. It’s been a while since I wrote on my favourite genre “crime” so I thought I’d give it a shot. Thank you very much Mike Vore for this week’s photo.
Awesome Ameena and so well written with the piano as a right picture
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Thank you Kamal. I enjoy reading crime books so thought I’d write one again.
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Yes absolutely agree and so nice.
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A great take on the photo prompt!
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Thank you. I’m glad you like it
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Chilling! I bet the package is 3 pints of blood! Creepy and chilling! Great story, Ameena!
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Thank you very much Pj, I had envisioned more like the fingers of the previous victim 😁. But anything goes here 😄
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very touching and well written..
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Thank you very much w
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Intriguing! Great story 🙂
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Thank you very much Kay 😄
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OH MY, So what perhaps is in the package? Don’t know if I want to know. 🙂
Great job!
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Haha, I agree with no. What we don’t know won’t hurt us, in this case. Thanks Joy
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Great job! Small, yet still gripping.
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Thank you very much! 😄😄
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Well done. Fantastic flow.
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Thank you very much, glad you like it
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Oooh captivating!!! What next…what’s in the package??? Well done Ameena,
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Haha, my lips are sealed on that one. I think in this case, I’d say, What we don’t know won’t hurt us 😁
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So we get to make up our own endings…;-)
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Love it. Very engaging. I want to know what happens next.
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Thank you miss T. I’m glad the story engaged you.
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