“Jeremy Abdul-Kareem Green!” A voice roared from across the parking lot, “you will not kill me before my time.”
The recipient of the intended threat, a young boy dressed in accordance with the impending storm expected to downpour any moment, stopped in his tracks. Jeremy had heard that same statement everyday of his life, he’d mastered a meek appearance with downcast eyes and pouted lips in response.
His mother sighed, then asked in a much lower voice, “what did you do this time?“
He had made paper boats and sent them down the toilet.
“And they sent you home for that?” She asked quizzically. Turns out, they weren’t just “a few” boats, which resulted in the clogging of the school drain.
Jeremy’s mother paused for a moment, then said, “9 days…The longest you’ve gone without getting into trouble so far,” Jeremy smiled.
“I wish you’d made it to ten, but, well it is progress”.
The teacher looking out to see if Jeremy’s mother had arrived was astounded to find the duo hugging.
word count: 173. This story is in response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring writers photo prompt challenge where each week we are provided a picture to write a 75-175 word story on. Thank you very much @Jessica Haines for this week’s photo.
Funny…some things turn into the norm…and is actually expected from someone. It reminds me of the students in school that always did crazy things to disrupt the class, but they never really got into trouble…however, let someone that is normally quiet and never causes trouble.. and when they do something , it becomes a major issue.
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LOL! Love his Mom and I would be hugging him to 🙂 Great job!
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Sweet tale, and good on the mum!
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Haha, I know! The mom surely knows how to handle it. Thank you Iain.
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Great post – really enjoyed it 🙂
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Thank you very much, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Aww, beautiful mother-son relationship portrayal.
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Thank you very much Jade 😄
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awwww. love how creative and unique this piece is! And so adorable too! ❤
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Thank you very much Rosema 😊😊.
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❤ ❤ ❤ always! 🙂
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Well 9 days is worth celebrating. Response to a child at such crucial times is very important
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Haha, yess it is! 😄
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That’s a cute tale 🙂
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Thank you! 😄😄
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This was great. Sounds like mama will help the boy harness that creativity toward something a bit less destructive eventually.
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Yes she Will! Thank you very much 😊
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Hahahaha! Such a cute story Ameena! I can imagine what that teacher must have thought seeing her student and his mother hugging after he had gotten in trouble in school. I enjoyed this!
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Thank you very much Pj 😊. I’m glad you did. I find it fun to write about kids
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Yes, kids are fun to write about!
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I think Jeremy’s mom is going to have her hands full. But she handles it with such grace.
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Hahaha, yes she is! But like you said, she does handle it with grace
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Reblogged this on TheKingsKidChronicles and commented:
Love this flash fiction story!. Probably most moms can identify with the love and frustration portrayed so well here. Reblogged from https://randomsbyrandom.wordpress.com
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Thank you very much for the reblog. I appreciate it 😊
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You are quite welcome. Always glad to promote good work.
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Lovely ending to this. Instant empathy 🙂
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Thank you very much Ben 😊
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