She said “you are worth saving”,
And I wanted to ask why,
For I went to bed at sundown,
Dreading seeing the daylight.
She told me, you are beautiful,
And I traced down all my scars,
Feeling every indentation-
Shrivelling at their sight.
She told me pick your self up,
There’s still strength in your stride;
But darkness had convinced me-
My bones could barely stand.
I wished that she would leave me,
To the company of my thoughts,
But my Lord had other plans, for
She stuck like gum on a wall.
Until I began to ponder,
What is it she sees in me;
Maybe beneath, I was more than,
Brokenness and fragility.
I sifted through the darkness,
For a single ray of light,
Something to show I was deserving,
Of such friendship, such heart.
Then everyday at sundown,
Under the company of the stars,
I searched for worth within me,
Even a trace, would suffice.
She said, I was worth saving,
Now I finally understand;
You can’t compel a person,
You can only show them how-
To believe they are worth saving.
Building the belief is all about! Very beautiful lines! 🙂
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Yes it is! We can’t compel people, they’ve got to believe. Thank you Prakash
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Wonderful poem! A truth that more need to know! The fact that they are worth saving. ❤
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Thank you very much Joy. Yes, it can never be said enough. We are worth saving. ❤
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Read this at the right moment. Wonderful words just as always Ameena! Beautifully written and what a wonderful message it conveys! Love it! ❤
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Ah, that is amazing to Hear. Now I am glad I shared it. Thank you very much 😊
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Really beautiful!
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Thank you very much 😊
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Another excellent and uplifting piece, Ameena! ❤ These lines echoed to me the loudest:
"Then everyday at sundown,
Under the company of the stars,
I searched for worth within me,
Even a trace, would suffice."
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Thank you very much Maria! I appreciate your support ❤
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Wonderful and so much in depth are the penned lines. As always the best of writing, Ameena. Beautifully written and what a fantastic message it conveys. Great work of art.
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Lovely ❤
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This is just beautiful!
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Aww, thank you very much 😊.
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It’s tough to make someone believe…nothing can be convinced, it can only be felt..beautiful lines ameena
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It is tough. They have to believe it themselves. Thank you Akhila
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Beautifully wordeed poem on self-worth. Your last lines are true, we cannot make anyone see they are worthy, they must decide themselves they are person deserving respect.
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Reblogged this on Mandibelle16 and commented:
One of my fav poets on WordPress, the lovely Ameena with a poem on selfworth. 🙂
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This is so true and beautiful.
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Thank you very much. 😄❤
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You’re welcome!
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So poignant and beautiful. Loved it!
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I’m deeply moved by your poetry and I LOVE your blog . You go girl xx
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AHHH. Reads like an ache albeit tainted with beauty.
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Thank you very much Noir. You sound poetic yourself 😁
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Hush you making me blush. That is a make me day compliment. :).
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