“Did you know..“, Adam began, for about the dozenth time in the past half hour he and his sister, Maina, had been on the boat ride. If he had noticed Maina rolling her eyes at his statement, he took no notice of it and went on describing the effect of the moon on ocean currents at different times of the day. A few minutes into the boat ride and Maina was already regretting her decision to invite him.
“You know“, she spoke up, “I invited you so we could bond not to receive a lecture about oceans and currents. My university lecturers are doing just fine on that front”.
“Fine”, Adam mumbled. Then added under his breath, “you should be grateful for the free knowledge I am imparting”.
The smile on Maina’s lips as she soaked in the silence following her brief falling out with her brother, faded away when their boat approached the Oakville bridge. Knowing Adam as well as she did, Maina knew exactly what was coming next,
“Did you know that bridges…”
word count: 175. So, I have question, do you guys also have somebody in your life (or are you that person) who just loves to give free advice and knowledge and can’t seem to stop?
This story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers photo prompt challenge. Thank you very much @Joy Pixely for this week’s photo.
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Very familiar sibling relationship, great portrayal.
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Thank you very much.
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Ugh! The infamous “know it all.” LOL!! It’s a good thing that Maina loves her brother! Hahaha! Cute story, Ameena!
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It is a good thing. That way, she can’t Stay cross for too long
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LOL! Very true!
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Lol. Yep. My oldest son. 😉
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It’s kinda cute but he does babble on some times. Lol.
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Hahaha, Thank you Jodi. We all have that person in out lives.
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good thing I love him so much LOL! ❤
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Lets just say I’ve been called the queen of info dumps. My friends often say that I should have my own online encyclopedia. Honestly, I don’t even notice it until my friends point out that I’ve been rambling on.
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Hahaha, thanks for sharing that. I do that too at times, only to realise eventually that I’ve been blabbing to uninterested listeners 🙈
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LOL at this story 🙂 My oldest and youngest 🙂 Great job!
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Hahaha, Thank you Joy 😄😄
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thank you for making me laugh, Ameena! This both adorable and endearing! 😀
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Aye, I do know some. I hope I’m not like that, but how many really know? Did you know…:D
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Haha, I think we all have our moments when we act like that regarding things we are passionate about.
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such an accurate portrayal of siblings banter – love the description so much
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Thank you very much. I’m glad you do.
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Cute, and it really gives insight to the brother/sister relationship. He just loves to share his knowledge and wants her to know about all the things he knows about. I know people like him and they just don’t realize that enough is enough!!! 🙂
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Thank you JC. Haha, I know?! They believe they’re just being helpful.
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Cute story. Those weird things are siblings are into that we ask about even though they bore us. Great write!
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Thank you Mandi. I have a feeling you’ve experienced it too. 😄
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Here yes 🙂
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O dear i will try to keep quiet.🙂🙂🙂
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Hahahah, thank you for your comment. 😄
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Haha, Thank you very much Rosema. Laugh all you want! 😄😄 sorry I’m just replying, I found this in my spam
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