I know-
I am not radiant like the sun,
Nor startling like lighting,
eye catching like a rainbow,
Loud and proud like the thunder.
I’m just a girl
Who’s taken too long to realise,
everything she needs,
she’s had within her,
Right from the start,
To surf through life’s storms,
And emerge at the finish line,
A victor? Maybe not.
But it’s the journey Which matters-
right?
I know all I am not,
And pointing just those facts to me,
Simply proves,
You are one of them,
whom-
I do not want.
thoughtful!!
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Thank you Lynx, I’m glad you like it 🙂
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So beautiful, Ameena! The right person will love all that you are and not worry about all that you are not ❤
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Thank you very much Jade. That is what I believe too 🙂
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Quite thoughtful!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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You tell them! Like the ending!!
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I know right!! thanks joy.
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No worry about what others say. They should worry about your own problems. People who are like that are often jealous because you have something within you they don’t, no matter if you’re plane or whatever your looks. They’re treated. Great writing Ameena!
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this is beyond beyond beyond beautiful my dear! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you very much Rosema. I really appreciate it ❤️
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you’re welcome! ❤
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Wonderful !
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Thank you Jahnavi, it’s great to have you back 😄
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Reminded me of Maya Angelou, absolutely love it. xx
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She is a legend in her art! The fact that this little poem reminded you of her, is the best commen, so thank you 😊😊
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Its so beautiful, you have a great poetic voice. I love your blog posts😃😃😃
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Aww, thank you very much, I truly appreciate it And I love your posts as well😄😄
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Aaaww thank you Ameena.
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I loved this so much!
Specially this part:
A victor? Maybe not.
But it’s the journey Which matters-
right?
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Thank you very much 😄😄. It is the journey which matters the most
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Trueh!
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Introspective and insightful … beautifully written.
Isadora 😎
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Thank you very much 😊
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Thank you very much 😊
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poignant and lovely as always 🙂
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Thank you very much Sana sis
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Wow, the best poem of the day! I just love it and the final lines just nailed it!
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Thank you very much for such an amazing comment, way to put a smile on my face! 😄
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Anytime!
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Superb!! Applaudes for this one!
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Thank you very much Meenakshi 😊
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