Flash Fiction: Family Squabble

Flash Fiction: Family Squabble


“do you know how expensive it is to take care of a horse?” Nathan was about to reply when his mother cut him,

“Never mind, I’ll tell you” she continued, very, that’s how expensive it is. Why you gotta spend so much money on an animal when you ain’t even gonna eat it.”

“Nobody eats horses”, Nathan snorted.
“You sure about that now son?” She asked with a raised brow.

Mama, I love you, but you touch a hair on my horse-“
“The horse you are yet to buy”, his mother interjected.
“yes, the horse I am yet to buy and I swear, I’ll tell the authorities”.

His mother threw her head back and laughed till streaks of tears glistened on her cheeks.
“Oh honey,” she declared wiping the tears off, “it’s gonna take nothing short of a SWAT team to put cuffs on these two wrists.”

It was a dare… And in that moment, Nathan decided the horse he was yet to buy would never set foot anywhere near fifty feet of his mother.

word count: 175 words. The above story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers photo prompt challenge hosted by Priceless Joy. Thank you @Phylor for this week’s image.Β 

22 thoughts on “Flash Fiction: Family Squabble

  1. Oh this made me laugh! Creative for sure, and yes Nathan better keep the horse away from his Mom! Make sure you keep it away from Colin as well. You never know what those Canadians might eat!

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    1. Hahaha, I agree with you on the Nathan thing.
      Joy!!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ you know, in my grandmother’s state, they eat cat.
      The local youth there keep their eyes on houses were cats are kept and well fed. And when the cats are grown and fat, they steal them to eat.
      Not sure about horses though.

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      1. Thought you would get a laugh out of that one πŸ™‚ Those Canadians are sly, so you just never know!
        OH MY on the kidnapping of cats to eat, can’t imagine!


      1. Oh? I still only have the one πŸ™‚ I’m not sure but maybe a different Mandi or another type of social media?


  2. So funny! But not to Nathan. Children believe things their parents tell them…even if it’s kind of wild. I’m sure he will be on his guard the minute he has possession of his horse. πŸ™‚

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