There’s always that one in every crowd. The one who goes left while everyone’s going right. The one who walks in a zigzag pattern while the rest are going in a straight line. The one who wears sportswear on casual outfit day. The one who comes to school prepared for a test to find out they were seating for finals. The one…
“Josiah Matthew Udom! All I asked for was why the man wearing a red cap was working away from the rest.” An exasperated Lyndi butted into her brother’s mini speech.
“Well, I was getting there before you interrupted me”, her brother, the construction site owner objected.
“Never mind, I’m sorry I asked. But thanks for the tour.” Lyndi took off without waiting for his reply. Knowing her brother, he was probably gearing up another speech on why the man in question chose to wear a red colored cap, of all the bountiful colors in existence.
word count: 150 words This story is in response to flash fiction for aspiring writers photo prompt challenge. Each week, a picture is provided for us to write a 75-175 word story. Thank you Ellespeth’s Friend for providing this week’s picture.
Cool story!
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Thank you 😄
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LOL! I take it her brother is a little long winded 🙂
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Hahaha, yes he is😄
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Is it bad that I totally relate to the brother? I’m sure my family would describe me this way!
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Hahaha, me too! High five there 🙋🏼
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The “I was getting there…” part reminded me of myself. I take forever to tell a story, drive people crazy 🙂
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LOL same here. My husband always ends up interrupting with questions as to say, “get to the point” :p
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Glad I’m not the only one! 🙂
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Same here! Haha, there are quite a few of us 😄. My sister was just telling me a similar thing a few days ago. Apparently I was taking too long now my story telling 😂
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LOL too funny
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I am probably the sister. When I write I can go onnnn but when I talk I like to keep it brief.
My husband however XD XD
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🙂 I’m amazed that I can write some of the short poetry forms, because whether talking or writing, I just keep going….. 🙂
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XD
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Your husband is just like my dad! Can go on and on and on 😂
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XD perhaps they should meet.
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Hahaha! Long-winded brother! She had to get out of there fast! Cute story, Ameena!
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Hehehe, yes she did PJ. She had had enough of his “speeches”. Thank you 😊
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Hahaha aww poor brother I was actually liking his story lol. Maybe because I always feel like I’m “that one” in every crowd 😉
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Hahaha, ooh, the brother would have loved to hear your comment! I tend to do that when I am told to tell a story. Every detail has to be told 😄
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LOL the brother sounds like a cool kid, if you ask me. Great take on the photo, Ameena!
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Hhehe, I’m pretty sure that’s the opposite of what Lundi would describe her brother 😂. Thank you Jade
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Funny! It reminds me of someone I know! Great story! 🙂
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Ha, I’m glad it did. Thank you Jc 😊
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Hahaha… Can I get a brother like that? Pretty, pleaseeeee? Great take, Ameena. I enjoyed it very much. 😀
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Hahaha, I think Lyndi would be willing to give you her’s for free 😄. I’m glad you did Maria. Thank you for reading it.
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Uh-uh. She better not regret it if she does want to do so. Haha! 😀 You’re most welcome, Ameena. ❤❤❤
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Hahaha! I’m with Lyndi! I couldn’t stand long winded people either. 😂😂😂
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Hehehe, then please do not ask me to tell you a story about a novel I just read. Left to me I could go page by page😂😂
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LOL! 😂😂😂
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Your story is very humorous, Ameena. I think we all know one person that is
always dragging out the answer to the question one might ask. Even a simple
‘How are you?’ can drag on and on. Well done …
Isadora 😎
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Hahha, yes we all do 😂 . Those people we tend to avoid . Thank you! And I am glad you like the story
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Great story.
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Thank you! 😄
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Man…I’d hate to see how long his morning meetings are with the crew…
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Hahaha, tell me about it. I’m sure the workers dread it. 😂
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Intriguing take!! A splash of colour often captures the eye!!
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Thank you very much, yes it does! 😄
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Thank you very much, yes it does! 😄
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How true is this. I like the way you brought out the black sheep in every crowd in the mix of the story. Well written.
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Thank you very much 😄. I’m glad you like it.
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My pleasure.
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Love it, cool!
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Thank you Lynz 😄
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Life is always more intricate than it looks…. It is so cool he could see the patterns on the wall!
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