Show me- the parts of you,
Living in- the depth of wounds;
The scars hidden from all to see,
Show me your soul, your zeal to live-
For there is someone like you, in me.
Save the small talks and pleasantries,
Speak to me of- the thoughts that keep;
Those memories- which haunt your dreams,
The galaxies you’ll love to visit-
For there Is someone like you, in me.
When the miles, our worlds divide,
And vocalization wouldn’t suffice;
Read the words, with my heart I write,
And know Alone- you’ll never have to fight.
For there is someone like you..
The above image is courtesy of Missingjim.com
Fantastic! I really needed this so thank you!
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Aw, thank you for making me smile š
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This is like every poet’s thoughts. lol We always go deeper than the surface. From the first stanza, I was hooked.
“Show me- the parts of you,
Living in- the depth of wounds;
The scars hidden from all to see,
Show me your soul, your zeal to live-
For there is someone like you, in me.”
I mean the feels in this is off the charts! Love it!
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Haha, I know right! And thank you very much for the comment, I’m just glad you like it š
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beautiful!
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Thank you Jodi. Glad you like it š
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“For there is someone like you….(in me)”. What wonderful reinforcement that we should never feel alone. A reinforcement that “you and I” are really not much different. A reinforcement that however different we may be on the outside, on the inside we have so much in common. A lovely piece Ameena. I loved it. š
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I think no one should ever have to feel alone. It used to be a relief, finding out that there was someone who finally had a trait that was previously unique to Me. We are more alike than Unalike š. Thank you!
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Boy, ain’t you a charmer with your words of deepness. I am here thinking if Ameena send this to a chap she likes, he would be besides himself, hehe :P. Excuse my liberties on this one. P.S I notice you change your theme, it is nice and “scrollable”
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Hahaha, no chap to send it to unfortunately š. Yeah, I was still in the midst of changing when my internet connections went crapoy and so I was stuck with this theme. I still haven’t decided if I would keep it or not, what do you think. This or the good ‘ol previous? I’m not that good with change š
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No worries about thr chap he will come along in due time. I like both themes for your blog but I prefer the other one simply because I got use to it :). If you wonder how your readers think on it and you want their input, you could do a poll. It is all up to you.
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Fabulous, amazing and m short of words now. It’s too good ā¤
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Aw, thank you girl!, š for your fabulous comment š
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Haha, no need babe š
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Beautiful poem, Ameena.
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Thank you very much š
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Ameena.. nice words..And know Alone- youāll never have to fight.
For there is someone like you..
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Thank you very much š… We shouldn’t have to feel alone,
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Hey Ameena, what a brilliant poem. That’s literally my mind when I think of the people I love. I want them to share all of their thoughts. Each and every kind of them. Because I’m human too. And I want them to know that I will understand.
It satisfies my soul when I understand people… I don’t know what that makes me, but I guess I’m more like a listener kind of a person.
Amazing poem ā¤
Also, I like that miniature slide show of pictures on the side. It's very positive š
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Thank you very much Hiba. I know right! I’m like, save the small talks, I also love when people talk to me about things they feel truly and deeply about. And you know, a listener is the best kinda person to be š.
I’ve been changing the blog’s theme and style all week, still in the process. So I’m glad you like the gallery. Tho I’ve got to update it š
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Ameena, this is so beautiful and it is true – we are all alike more than we know!
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Thank you Pj š. I remember feeling relieved when I realised I’m not the only one who feels or does certain things.
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I know what you mean and I agree! š
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This is a beautiful poem, Ameena. š Deep conversations are the best type to have! The meeting of two minds is a wonderful thing. ‘For there is someone like you, in me.’ Perfect . š
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Thank you very much Louise. I love having deep conversations with people, it could be about anything as long as you’re passionate about it. š
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Reblogged this on I'm Here; Right Here. and commented:
There’s a person inside every person who no one knows of. Just read this poem. EXTREME BEAUTY. WOW.
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The beginning was a wowiee.. I literally opened my eye wide at it. What are you? Really. You bring in so much depth in just a couple of words. I feel proud Ameena. I could not help but decorate my blog with a reblog. Loved it.. ā¤ š
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That beginning has been circulating in my drafts for months, I only just decided to complete it. Thank you so so much for the reblog.
Did it remind you of someone? š
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You have got special powers from a way back then. haha
Yes, it reminded me of someone, you actjk ually. š
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This poem was captivating and so true! I LOVE IT! And was picturing us meeting face to face and yes Pleasantries would be put aside, while speaking of what’s deep inside š Awesome job!!
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Thank you Joy! Hahaha, you win that lottery and it’d happen soon š
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Amazing love it š
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Thank you Rabiya, I’m glad you like it š
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Welcome š
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Wonderful sentiments in your words, a little piece of each person’s soul lives in their neighbour’s heart as we are all human, regardless of colour, creed or sexual orientation.
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Thank you very much! We are alike, even in the littlest way.
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loving it because… may be… there is someone like you in me š
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Haha, there is… š
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Bravo! I must…
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Thank you for taking the time to visit my posts today. Truly I appreciate it š
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Reblogged this on Gina's blog and commented:
This is Awesome!!!
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