Curled up.
Nowhere to run
No one to run to
The silence- haunting
Limbs- trembling
Face, stained
In all the right places.
Today- was not okay.
A while,
A long time it took-
Regained composure
Silence, still haunting
Limbs- exhausted
Face- weary;
Today- was not okay.
Relapsed-
An overdue setback;
Overtaking emotions;
Grim thoughts- engulfing
Alone- vulnerable
The thoughts won that time.
Today,
Was not okay;
Today,
The thoughts- raging;
Today,
She did get through it;
Today,
She knows she can-
Tomorrow will be okay.
yes InshaAllah, tomorrow will be a better day! Never give up 🙂
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In Sha Allah ❤❤. Thank you
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Always important to have hope that tomorrow will be better. http://bit.ly/1ER5cLY
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And after every bad today, comes a beautiful tomorrow!! Ameen..
Inshallah… May Allah swt grant you with the choicest of blessings! Ameen..
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Aw, thank you very much dear for the prayer. Ameena and for you as well. ❤
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Ameena this was extraordinary. I felt so sad for this young lady. Then, you ended it so sweetly, there is always the glorious hope of tomorrow. You reminded all of us, no matter how bad your day is, there is always the hope that tomorrow will be better. An inspiring post. Good work.
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Thank you very much. I realised, a lot of times, hope is what keeps us going through the day to the next.
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So true. It was a great piece. Loved reading it.
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Praying for you. Blessings, Emma
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Thank you! ❤ ❤
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You are welcome. 🙂
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Reading this you can feel her distress and the struggle to gain control of the situation knowing there are days when she can not , but still encouraged that setbacks do happen , however , you feel her looking forward to a new day and a better one. Lots of emotion and weariness in this poem, but also hope. Very good poem!
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Thank you JC! I couldn’t have analyzed this poem any better, really you nailed it. It makes me happy to see that the exact meaning I was trying to share has rightly been captured. 🙂
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Yes, tomorrow she’ll be okay. I feel so much for what the speaker is going through. Sending love! Great piece, Ameena!
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Thank you Annie, hope for a better tomorrow tends to lighten the burden of a bad day. ❤
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Mashallah this is so pretty. It’s amazing how deeply you can tell a story in just a few short words. I think it ended beautifully with the hope for a better day tomorrow!
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Thank you very much ❤ . Emily Dickinson said in her poem "Hope is a thing with feathers", tomorrow is usually in Sha Allah.
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Beautiful piece! Felt like I was singing as I read through your poem! A song of hope… to look forward to tomorrow.
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Aww, thank you very much! 🙂
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Tomorrow is another day
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Yes! And a better day it will be 🙂
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InshaAllah
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Tomorrow is always a word used to equate hope…that the situations of today’s failings, distress is just for a moment for it would pass away…this is a beautiful poem, a glimpse of a hidden section of a life.
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Thank you very much. Hope is what keeps us going a lot of the times and sometimes, the hope for tomorrow is what helps to get one through the day. 🙂
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Really hit home for me, it is like you peek at my thoughts/heart and you wrote this poem. Tomorrow come already.
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Hehe, telepathy maybe? 😉
I know right?! There are days where I literally can’t wait for tomorrow to come already!
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I’ve always wanted the gift of telepathy, haha. Yes I know you mean because sometimes ‘todays’ sucks!
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You perfectly described a bad day I had this week. A very moving poem.
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Thank you very much and I’m glad It is something you could relate to. ❤
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Wonderful poem that says so much, yet the last line says it all!
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Thank you PJ. For me, that last line was the heart of the whole poem because at the end of the day, that last line was all that mattered .
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Yes, I agree. And, it is a wonderful poem!
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Many a day I have been there.
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Oh, I know what you mean. And thank you for reading. I’m glad you could relate.
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