“What are you staring at?”
“Nothing“
“Don’t nothing me”
“Alright, fine! I was watching to see when this chrysalis would open up.”
“Seriously?”, Janice laughs.
“Naah, I’m just kidding. I told you, It was nothing.”
“Alright girl, I’m going out. See you later.”
“Bye”
The sound of the door closing was a little loud for the empty house. Ally, went back to her nothing. She knew her sister, Janice, wouldn’t get it so she didn’t bother explaining.
Ally had always been fascinated by butterflies. She turned her gaze towards the hanging chrysalis and wondered when it would open for the butterfly to emerge. To see a creature as dull as a caterpillar transition into one of the most beautiful creatures was a fascination gifted to only a few. It reminded Ally that humans weren’t much different, and everyone could blossom.
Ally sighed as she realized, the cocoon of the chrysalis was the same as the previous day, no changes. Before leaving, Ally whispered in it’s direction.
“Please don’t emerge without me”
word count: 171. This story is in response to flash fiction for aspiring writers photo prompt challenge. Each week, a photo is given and we’re to write a 150 (+/- 25) word story inspired by the image. Thank you so much TJ Paris for this week’s photo. Butterflies are a beauty.
Loved it 🙂
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Thank you Hargun. Butterflies are a beauty, I was glad for the photo prompt. ☺
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Lovely story Ameena! I hope the Chrysalis cacoon doesn’t open without her. It is truly amazing that an ugly caterpillar changes into something so beautiful.
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Thank you Pj. I have a feeling, ir wouldn’t. I know! The butterfly truly is an inspiration
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Some wanna go back to cocoon, some flew further away…don’t remember the chrysalis, and some fly around, and still love the smell.
Great work by pretty spontaneous author.
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Hahaha, nice!!! Love the words above ❤❤
And thank you so much.
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I Really enjoyed this piece
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Thank you very much. I actually enjoyed writing this. 😄
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Aw!! This one is beautiful, Amee!!! And you said it right… We humans are not much different too… Sometimes an unworthy or not so beautiful like a caterpillar can emerge as a beautiful butterfly. And we have many examples like this 🙂
Thank you for this beautiful thought and making a post of it!! ❤
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Thank you Nimmi 😊. I couldn’t agree more! The metaphor of the caterpillar is an inspiration. I’m so glad you like it!
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That’s true and pleasure reading 🙂
Cheers my dear!! 🙂
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Great Work.
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Thank you very much! 😊
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Welcome.
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I enjoyed your post. I liked the last line ” please don’t emerge without me.” It’s as if the younger sister will to emerge when the chrysalis opens.
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Thank you Mandi, I’m glad you liked it. ☺
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Aww mashallah this one is so cute. Its so simple but a little deep at the same time! Love it as always.
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Haha, Thank you dear! 😄 yeah, that was why I don’t post my story early, I couldnt find a way to fit in a twist and thought it was rather simple. But now, i’m so happy y’all liked it 😄
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Love your story. I’ve seen the process and it is amazing!
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Thank you JC. Ahhhh, I’ve never seen one, I can only imagine how it felt to see the wings emerge.
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Superb work
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Thank you Girl!! ☺
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Always beautiful !♡
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This flash fiction of yours reminded me that, it doesn’t matter if you’re a late bloomer. The important thing is that you’re gonna bloom and be the brightest of them all ❤
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Hahaha, I love this comment! Exactly, you’re still gonna bloom. They say, the best is saved for the last 😁
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Oh this is awesome! Go Ally! You will bloom just like the butterfly! I see my youngest daughter in this, Thanks! ❤
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‘….everyone could blossom.’ That’s really lovely! Great piece! 🙂
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Thank you very much 😄
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Loved it! ❤
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