Katy flounced into the audition room wearing a strapless polka knee-length gown, paired with black all-stars converse, she was hoping the mixture of dressy and casual would help adhere her towards the judges. The scream of “next” upon her entrance was a slap on the cheek.
“But I haven’t even auditioned”, she protested.
“Sorry love, maybe next time. Now hurry off.. Next contestant!” the bald judge, Andre screamed, looking beyond Katy towards the entrance.
“I’ll be dammed if I leave here without an audition” muttered Katy.
A crash resonated throughout the almost empty hall.
“Quick, someone get an ambulance”, Andre ordered.
Katy lay on the floor, her hands limp by her side while the rest of her body shuddered. She was salivating by the time Andre got to her. Scared out of his wits, he tried to position her body to lay laterally on her side when he thought he noticed a grin.
“How’s that for an audition”, Katy winked.
word count: 161. This story is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers photo prompt challenge. Thank you Etol Bagam for the lovely picture. If you’d love to participate in this 150 (+/- 25) word writing challenge, just clink on the link above.
Hahaha! I love this! She was determined to audition so I hope she got the part! LOL! Thank you for participating in the challenge!
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Hahaha, I have a feeling she got the part after putting on the most unexpected audition! Thank You PJ
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😀 😀 🙂
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That was good!!
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Thank you Mel ☺
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Hahaha best
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Thanks Izza 😄😄
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Desperate measures for desperate situations.
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Hahaha, Katy’s logic exactly!
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She did not… bwhaha! While that could be a deal breaker, what does she have to lose? I love it! Take that for not even giving her a chance. Excellent job!
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Oh yes she did! 😀 I have a feeling Andre won’t be so quick to dismiss people after that. thank you Izzy ☺
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This definitely caught me by surprise! Love how she got her “audition” in! Had to laugh at the slap on the cheek part! Laughed because I think we posted our posts around the same time and I was doing your story which contains a slap in it! Remember the words you gave me 🙂
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Hahaha, ohhhh your story was amazing, it honestly made my day. Two slaps in one day 😁
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This story held me through, right till the last word! Climax was good, though I predicted :P, but reading what you predicted, sometimes, become more interesting and binds you to the story! Very well written Ameena. God Bless….
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment. ❤❤
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Well, pleasure is all mine. Looking forward to read more of such stories. ❤
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Nice take on prompt 🙂
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Thank you Madeeha. I loved the image prompt, it was inspiring.
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Very captivating cheeky tale. loved it.
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Thank you! I wanted to go the humor theme this week.
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Sneaky! If she makes it to the ER, the docs will give her 10/10 😉
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Hahaha, I know?! I an already giving her a 10
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That will teach Andre not to dismiss people on looks alone! Hopefully she’ll get the part. 🙂 A great story, Ameena.
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I know! I hope Andre’s learnt his lesson. And after that audition, she does deserve the part 😁. Thank you so much Louise for commenting.
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Love it! 😊
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Thank you Kat. I am glad you do. ☺
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Loved how you used the prompt and the twist with the audition. 🙂
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it. This week, I wanted to make the story a bit lighthearted. ☺
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Wow now that’s being passionate and lil’ crazy;) awesome story
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Hahaha, all passionate people are a bit crazy! 😁 thank you Huma ❤
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Reblogged this on TheKingsKidChronicles and commented:
Here’s an interesting flash fiction story by Random. Nicely written twist. Happy reading!
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What a cool way to get an audition. Hope she’s not in the ER too long, and hope she gets the part. She sure wanted it badly enough.
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I doubt she’ll be taken to the ER once Andre finds out it was just “acting”. And thank you for the reblog.
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Loved the twist!
Brought a grin to my face 😉
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Awww, I’m glad it did Hargun. That was the point-of the story. ☺
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🙂
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(smiling) Good one. I like Katy, you had me fooled at the beginning I was already thinking to comment about poor girl this Katy……
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