Alone, they are a beauty;
Together-
An overwhelming force.
In patches, barely floating;
Combined-
A covalent bond.
The clouds, hover a reminder,
Of the beauty-
When two become one.
She gazes at them and wonders-
Can two hearts,
Produce an equal force.
The clouds together, ecstatic;
Two hearts- she knew not.
Day 1 of October Poetry writing month. Today’s prompt is Cloud. IMAGE CREDIT: Morgan Dragonwillow
Nicely done!
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Thank you. 😊
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Love the parallels you’ve made. Good stuff!
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Thank you very much. I’m glad you like the odd contrast.
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❤💚💙💜
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this is a beauty!
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Thank you. The clouds are a beautiful inspiration ☺
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I liked the thought process behind this poem a lot.. very interesting piece, good job 🙂
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Thank-you very much. I’m glad you like it. ☺
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This is brilliant. I guess reading your blog will be worthy of my time
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Haha, I hope so. Thank you! 😄
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I like that..covalent bond:)
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Thank you! That was actually a last minute addition 😁
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Tranquility search in my cloud outlines the patched errors… Just lamenting to your creative poetry.
Keep it up.
Regards:
James
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Never would have thought to parallel clouds to lovers, but it works out so great. Once again your creativity sparks grandly 🙂
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Hahaha, I wouldn’t have thought so too before, it was a spur in the moment thought 😄. Thank you so much Joy ❤❤
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Well said!! Beautiful, dear. ❤ 🙂
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Thank you very much Nimmi. Much love 😘
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Pleasure is all mine dear! Love to you ❤ 🙂
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Thank you, It was a bit odd combo at first but I’m glad you like it.
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