She had never been whole. She was a collage of uniquely designed pieces. With each person she trusted, she gave a piece. With each one she loved, she gave a piece. They never really knew her, only the pieces she let them see.
Some were handed a glimpse of her childhood, stories of her pranks; some her laughter, the events which made her smile; a few, her passions- the pieces which lit her eyes; a minute, she gave her sorrows, the memories that tug at her heart.
And some, she swore to take her grave, the pieces no one knew she had. The dark patches, the mystery behind who she was. She thought it a burden to lay it on people; she could barley handle it, how could they. Those pieces she kept close to her.
Those dark pieces, were the borders of the intricately designed puzzle of “her” without which she could never really be figured.
And she smiled knowing, although soon enough, the abnormal cells within her would win, the pieces she left with the ones she loved would illuminate her memories. She gave them the light she needed them to see.
Each person a different piece, a different memory, a different reflection of history, a different light. She was a uniquely designed puzzle.
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Very well written. The “jigsaw” reality is often prevalent at funerals when you hear various tributes each of which highlights a totally different character trait from the others.
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Thank you Colin. It is true, a lot of times we show different sides to different people. ☺
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Wonderfully written…
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Thank you very Much Trae☺
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So beautiful!
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Thanks joy 😄
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Ameena – this is so poignantly beautiful! Is this fiction? Or is this you?
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Thank you Jodi ☺. It is fiction.
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I just had to smile at this, I am not the only one that has to ask that about your writings from time to time 🙂
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I absolutely love this! Perfectly written.
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Thank you very much Bridgette, I’m glad you like it. 🙂
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I loved the line, ‘They never really knew her, only the pieces she let them see’
That’s An intriguing writeup, Very well written .
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Thank you Hargun :). That line actually my foundation for the whole piece.
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It is evident 😉
You’re welcome 🙂
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That was also my fave line:)
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I thoroughly enjoyed the post. Beautifully written…….
Have a great day!
~Arcane Owl
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Thank ou! Ah, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day 🙂
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Every post just makes me fall a little bit more for your blog. Your posts are such a beauty Ameena, really.
I’m just so glad I follow your blog.
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Ohhh Aakansha, this comment melts my heart. You remind me of why I keep on writing. Thank you so much ❤ ❤ .
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That’s a brilliant concept,very well presented!
I love her whole,every piece of this character 😉 🙂
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I love this, Ameena. I think the concept is true for many of us – we show differential parts of ourselves to different people. 🙂 Beautifully done.
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Thank you very much Louise.
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I identify with this so deeply! Beautiful!
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Thank you Ana. This one of those pieces even I identify with. 💕
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I love this ❤️
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Thank you Emma, I’m glad you do 😊
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