Placed myself
In others shoes;
Wrote about them
To escape the truth;
My world, crumbling-
Brick at a time;
The walls, closing in-
Nowhere to hide.
Loneliness ripping
The veins in my heart;
Memories turning
My nights into trials.
In prayer I found
The passion to breathe;
With ink from my vein-
I regained my will;
Through writing and rhyming,
Transforming my feelings,
To words read on paper-
I regained my zeal.
Placing myself,
In my own shoes;
I wrote my reality,
And realized my truth.
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This seriously amazing and beautiful, your writing is supurb. I would love it if you could find the time to check out my blog and leave some feedback as I have recently began to inroduce my poems (although they are no were as near as good as yours) π
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Wow! Such a nice poetry!!
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Thank you very much! Aw. I’m glad you like it. π
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Pleasure is all mine.. π
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Amazing lines!
“In prayer I found the passion to breathe
With ink from my vein I regained my will”.
Beautiful!
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Thank you very much! π
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Welcome! πππΌ
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This was the best on my reader babe π
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Thanks Girl! kisses for you ππ
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It’s awesome my dear!! ππ
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Aw, thank you Nimmi π *heart received *
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Pleasure dear! π π
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Hmmm, flowy, impactful and deep: no filters, a naked view of the inside.
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You always get my poems! Haha
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I always read between the lines and/or the words reminds of a similar situation in my life. So sometimes I have help trying to understand the poem.
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Just so lovely β‘β‘β‘β‘
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Aww, thank you so much β€
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Love it and was gonna quote the lines that Captain Kacha quoted as my favorite to. “In prayer I find the passion to breathe!” Been there! β€
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Thank you Joy! Now that is my favorite too π
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Wonderfully expressed.. !
Kudos!!
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Thank you Hargun !
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Aw, thank you Nimmi π *heart received*
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