Lucinda slugged her way through a rocky, undulating pathway to arrive at the hill-top. Stopping to catch her breath, she noted down the exterior of Retmor manor, all the while, cursing her luck for getting the most boring assignment- History of Retmor manor.
It was a ginormous stony rectangular building with high walls and an isolated tower placed at each angle. A narrow metal door led towards the interior of the building and there were no other exits. The first floor was bare while the second contained portraits lined across it’s walls. At the far-right corner was the picture of a lady who could pass for “18th century Lucille”. Lucille stared jaw-dropped at the picture, lost for words. She rubbed her eyes, re-affirming it wasn’t in fact a dream.
Just then a male voice boomed all around the mansion, Lucille’s heart quickened and pulse raced. “Don’t be scared, your highness“, the voice said “this is only your destiny“. The color drained from Lucille’s face and all she could think of was “I am so screwed”.
word count: 175. This story is in response to Flash Fiction for aspiring writers photo prompt challenge, hosted by Priceless Joy. Every week, a new photo is released and the participants are required to write a 150 word story (give of take 25). It is so much fun participating named also reading the wonderful stories written by the other writers. Do check out the link above, there is a story for everybody there.
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LOL! She got stuck with an assignment she didn’t want. History of Retmore Manor and ended up finding out it was her ultimate destiny. Poor thing, to have a destiny you want no part of. This is a great story Ameena and you made the imagery very clear. (Maybe once she sees the face connected to the voice her mind might change). Thank you for participating with FFfAW challenge! I appreciate you!
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Thank you PJ, I actually really liked the photo prompt. It inspired me almost immediately. Hahaha, I do agree , she is going to change her mind. 🙂
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It was a great story Ameena! I enjoy all the stories you write.
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Funny and amusing…I bet she is no longer bored! And, it will probably be the most memorable assignment she ever has. 🙂
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Thanks JC . Haha. I bet she isn’t. It’s as they say, sometimes, it’s the things we dislike that are actually good for us .
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Lovely tale, the beginning of a great love story, or worse. 🙂 Well done!
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Thank you Yolanda 🙂 . Haha, yeah, a great love story sounds Better 😀
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Thanks JC. Haha, I bet she isn’t. It’s as they say, Sometimes, it’s the didn’t we dislike that is actually good for us .
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that is interesting. i loved how she didn’t lose her sense of humor in the middle of crisis. well done.
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Thank you very much. I believe in some tough circumstances, humor is a great solution 🙂
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A great story, Ameena. That must have been quite a shock for her! I hope you don’t mind me pointing out that you call the character Lucinda in the first paragraph and Lucille later on.
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Oh thank you so much. I am glad you pointed it out to me. Read it sevrally, but still didnt notice. Thanks 🙂
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Your welcome. :)Pesky typos will always creep in!
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HaHa! Now, it is my turn to laugh after reading yours. I love the ending where she thinks “I am so screwed.” It makes me want to see what ends up happening to her. Well done!
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Thank you! 😄 i’m glad you like it. I know, even I as the writer am a bit curious to know what happens next 😁
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Great take on this prompt Ameena, I had the same comment about the names as Louise…..but I liked the way you ended it….exclamations always work for me…
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Thank tou very much. I am having problems editing it on my phone, but as soon as i get on my Ipad, will tackle it.
Thank you very much for your wonderful comment. 🙂
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You are most welcome.
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I loved the way you built the whole suspense and the twist at the end ! Wow 🙂
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Thank you Himali… Haha, it was tough deciding to keep that last line actually. But now, i’m glad i did 😊
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Hmm, a promising prologue for a historical fiction with a time travel twist. Forgive me, old building with the word history makes my heart smile and my mind racing 12 starts ahead. Lucille is indeed screwed.
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Hahaha. No more seriea Noir :D. This is actually my first borderline historical piece. Aw, i am glad to hear it. You really are passionate about history.
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You cannot blame a girl for trying ;). Yes, History is my first love.
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Well, I think she’s probably right about being so screwed! But perhaps it will improve an otherwise boring assignment. Amusing story, Ameena 🙂
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Hahaha, i daresay it will improve it 😁. thank you very much Millie.
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Nicely told story to the prompt. Loved the last line. Left me laughing. 🙂
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