The water moves with a speed akin to that of dogs chasing after squirrels, it rushes towards the rocks. Rises with vehement force into ginormous waves and then, collapses all at once with a turbulent sound- that’s on a cold stormy day.
During the Summer, the rays of the sun reflects on the cerulean sea with its low tides, swaying in a slow rhythmic fashion.
The isolated fortress located at the center of Norman’s island (a place rarely visited) was Kiara’s home for six years and 277 days now. Silence and loneliness were the backbone towards her friendship with the sea- she had become at master at the language of water.
She was the sole survivor of a ship wreck and had sought refuge in the fortress, that was the last time her pale feet graced the grassy outside of the building’s four walls. But yet, she hoped, someday, HE would set her free. The price of being rescued couldn’t be that expensive, could it?
word count: 165. This story is In response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers photo prompt challenge. We get a photo every week and then wrote a 150-175 word story on it. To read more or even participate, clink on the highlighted link above. Thank you TJ Paris for such an astounding picture.
Nice story Ameena! I hope HE rescues her soon. I enjoyed your story, as always! Thank you for participating in FFfAW. I really appreciate your loyalty! Thank you Ameena.
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Thank you very much PJ, it really is fun participating. Gets my writing juice going. 🙂
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I’m so happy to hear that Ameena! 🙂
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I think after 6 years and 277 days, I would be ready to pay almost any price to be set free! 😱.
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Haha, exactly kiara’s thoughts. 🙂 thank you for reading
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Oh my! It’s painful to imagine her situation. I’d like to see her free 🙂
Nice imagination!
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I know right! Thank God it is only fiction. 😉
Hopefully, someday, she will be free… Thanks NL
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Nice story. I like how the ending makes you want a sequel.
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Hahah, thank you very much. 🙂
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An intriguing story, Ameena, with some lovely descriptions. I like the way you stress the difference between summer and winter … the idea of a calm, cerulean sea is perfect. The statement that HE would set her free is the intriguing part, as well as the idea of a ‘price’ for being rescued. It’s definitely time she left that island. 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I’ve been doing a bit of reading these days and trying to imbibe some features into my writing. I’m glad you like it.
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It was well done, Ameena. 🙂
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I wonder if she’s waiting for a prince charming to rescue her or if there’s more to it than that.. great story Ameena 😛
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Hahaha, I think Prince Charmings are overrated 😉 .
I think somehow she’ll find a way to get herself out of it. 🙂
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I hope she somehow gains freedom from the island and that the price demanded is not too steep. An interesting and intriguing story, Ameena. 🙂
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I believe she will get away from the island, eventually 🙂
Thank you.
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Excellent piece Ameena! 🙂 I hope HE is on the way! 😀
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Hey Prakash, thanks a lot!
Haha, hopefully HE is 😀
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