Three dream catchers on the porch, three laptops, three pairs of pictures, threes’ of everything and Anna knew she was in the right place. This was undoubtedly “Harrison” aka “H”‘s house. For a genius, he paid little attention to his passwords; he was still the same man after all.
Images of a beautiful brunette woman were plastered all around the messy apartment. Most of them, disturbing. Anna gaped at the somewhat hundreds of images of Allison Blake. This wasn’t going to be the re-union she had hoped for.
A particular isolated picture captured her attention. It was of a stone walled, ancient looking church with one of those rare tower bells. She remembered how she had first met H coming home from a church. Her adrenalin kicked in. She realised what was happening, H was stalking his new prey just as he had stalked her. Anna made a resolve there in, if it was the last thing she did, she would save this woman, she would save Allison Blake. She got to work, beginning with H’s laptop.
This post is in response to Flash fiction for aspiring writers photo prompt challenge hosted by priceless Joy. Word count: 177, slightly over. This is also a continuation of my flash fiction series “Blackouts”. I’ve created a new sub category at the top of my page titled “blackout series” in order to make it easier to find all the other past episodes. Here’s the link: Blackouts Series
I wish I can also write flash fictions, you’re so talented! 😀
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Hahaha, I try :). I bet you can. I didn’t think I’ld be able to fit a story in150 words too 😀 . You know, it’s not too late to try .
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Sounds like Anna is going to save Allison! This Harrison sounds like a “nut case.” I look forward to next week’s to find out what happens! Great story Ameena!!
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Haha, Harrison Sure is one! I hope she found a way to save Allison before she died, remember Anna is dead, she was found drowned. This parts are flashbacks to see what led to her death.
And thank you PJ.
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Thanks for explaining to me Ameena! I reread them all a few weeks ago but now I have forgotten them again. (I’m clinging onto what little bit of brain matter I have left. LOL!)
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Hahahah, its okay. Figured the whole back and forth thing might be a bit confusing 😂😂
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Intriguing story, Ameena. Anna’s a feisty character, who will probably succeed in her mission to save Allison Blake from Harrison’s clutches. Well written.
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Yes she is! And that’s my favorite thing about her. I hope so too but we’ll have to wait and see. Thank you 🙂
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Yes Anna is ALIVE!! YAY!! Go Allison!!! So is Richard as bad as Harrison???? Are they working together? Is Harrison trying to control Richard??? So many questions left to answer by the GREAT Author 🙂 🙂
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Hahaham you are never going to let go of Richard are you?! 😀 , tho it might be a good thing. Oh, I hate to say this Joy, but Anna Is dead 😦 . Allison watched on TV in a previous part that Anna was drowned. Now, we’re going into flashback in order to find out who Anna is and why she died.
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Haha! Nope I am not, there is just something about him!! OOPS! I knew that, but my brain forgets things easily, Haha! Thanks for clearing it up, tho I would have liked her to still be alive. Maybe it was just her identical twin that died, LOL!! Ok, I will be quiet and let you write your masterpiece that will be published someday 🙂
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Hahaha, now that is one intriguing suggestion 😄. I wish I had thought of tgat earlier- the identical twin aspect.
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Even if Allison doesn’t save Anna, I hope she manages to find enough dirt on Harrison to get him put behind bars. Good continuation. 🙂
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I hope so too, but for now, we’ll have to wait and see. Haha, i didn’t think the story would go on this long :D. Thank you
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One day some producers comes across the Blackouts and offers a miniseries because you sure know how to flip the switch, creating drama and keeping your readers hook. ;).
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Hahahah, Awww, thank you so much for the compliment. 😄😄
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Well, fingers crossed Anna succeeds. I find writing a series is quite tricky. Did you plan yours or are you taking it as it comes with every prompt?
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Yes, it is very tricky indeed. I actually just wait for the prompt to come out, and then i figure out a fitting continuation. Makes it more fun than way.
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Yes, that’s been pretty much my approach, too. I know how I want it to end, but the rest is up in the air.
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Great suspense story. Anna was pretty brave to check out Harry’s laptop and just seeing all those pictures of Allison was enough to question his motives. Maybe he drowned her or had someone else drown her.
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I wish I could give you the answer but we’ll to wait and see. Anna is one brave lady 😁. Thank you.
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Enjoyable. This is the first I’ve read in the series, but I’m intrigued to read the others.
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Thank you very much 😊. I’m glad you do and i really appreciate it
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Interesting story. I’m glad Anna is alive. Sorry I am so late in the week, reading your story. 🙂
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Aww, please no need for apologizes, i also havent blogged through out this week. I really appreciate your interest in thia and reading it. Thank you 💜
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You have a way with words! I like your writing voice 🙂
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate it. 😊
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My pleasure!
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