Allison had barely recovered from her blackout she when she noticed a poster rolled at the side table. The picture that stared at her as she opened it sent shivers down her spine. In an act of reflex, she shredded the paper violently into pieces; clasping her fingers on her throbbing head, she screamed “No, no, no”.
To an outsider, the picture would have been a picturesque location of a beautiful waterfront. Decked with colorful boats, a background of tall skyscraper buildings and slow waves on which the rays of the sun gleamed. But Allison knew better. That picture held the location of an incident she struggled to erase from her memory. That was where her sister’s cold body was found from an apparent suicide drowning.
How the picture got to Willow’s Place, Allison had no idea. She had rented the house all to herself for the time being. Before her emotions could take a turn for the worse, Allison picked up the phone with trembling hands and dialed a number.
“Hello, I need help!”
Word count: 175. This post is in response to Flash Fiction For Aspiring writers and also a sequel to my last week submission, Blackouts. I hope you had a wonderful read. Credit for inspiration goes to the wonderful writers who had written beautifully for this week’s prompt and whose stories inspired me to whip my writing pen.
Excellent! Sounds like a continuation is ahead…. 🙂
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Thank you PJ. I’m hoping so too 🙂
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I cannot wait to read more:)
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Yay, Thanks NL 🙂
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Great!
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Thank you Mandi! 🙂
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Wow! you have made it interesting.. 🙂 Waiting for take 03!
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Haha, thanks pH. Now, onto take 3 😉
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wow! It’s gonna be a set of cool posts… 🙂
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Lets hope soooo 😀
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Hope will always take us there..! 😀
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The next part is now eagerly awaited, Ameena. You’ve written an exciting story with an intriguing ending. I wonder who she’s phoning …? I’d just like to make a suggestion. There’s no need for a question mark at the beginning of your last paragraph. There is no question, just a statement. To be a question it would need to be: How did the poster get to Willow’s place?
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Thank you very much for the suggestion. It is a statement not a question, you’re right. Will edit it now.
Thanks 🙂
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You’re welcome. I’m glad you weren’t offended that I mentioned it, Ameena. 🙂
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Very suspenseful. I too am wondering who she is calling. I’m looking forward to Part 3. Just wondering if the name of the house is Willow’s Place (needing capitals for both words) or does the house belong to Willow as in Willow’s place? (just need a capital for Willow?) Now to go back and read Part 1!
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The name of the place is “Willow’s Place”. Thank you for pointing it out to me, haha, i didn’t realise there was actually a difference :D. Thanks for the comment. 🙂
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I feel like an idiot! After I wrote that comment to you, “Hope you will join us.” That I realized you had joined us and was writing flash fiction with us. My mind must have been in the clouds (probably from lack of sleep. I have been waking up at 2:00 am and 3:00 am!) Luckily, this morning, I woke up at 7:00 am. Yay!! This is a lovely story Ameena and I look forward to more continuations!
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Hahahaha, please don’t PJ. It is OKAY! I also can’t function when i’m not able to sleep. Really its ok, i figured you just forgot. 🙂
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(((HUGS!!)))
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Things are not what they seem AT ALL! I wonder how that picture got here, if her sister really did commit suicide, if Allison’s blackouts are just from chronic stress (which is bad enough), and who she’s calling for help. Looking forward to the next piece!
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Hahaha, No they ARE NOT! 😄. Hmmm, now you have given me more ideas and suggestions to use, Thanks! I hope you do like the next piece. 🙂
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A great continuation Ameena ~ I am really looking forward to the next episode. 🙂
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed thia one. Can’t wait to share the next part too 🙂
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I liked the suspense and dread in this piece. I was a little confused…Willow is her sister? And she’s renting her sister’s old apartment?
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She’s living at a place called “Willow’s Place”
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Willow’s Place is the name of the house she is renting. I hope its a bit clear now 😃
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Beautifully done!
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Thank you very much ghrelin😊
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So glad you did a part 2 and I definitely see a part 3 coming now 🙂 I get the feeling there was more to her sister’s drowning then what is said. Is she calling a psychologist, the Doctor?? Keep writing my friend, curious minds are anxious! 🙂
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Great job at connecting the pictures together in the story.
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