Break away- oh little one,
Unto the sky, to see the world;
Taste the pollens on rose buds,
Trust in your wings, to take you there;
Embrace the beauty you’ve become,
Rock your wings, unto safe haven;
Follow the path less taken,
Lest you be caught- in a web of sly;
You trust in your wings, you’ll make it.
In response to Writing201 Poetry assignment 3. The prompt is “Truth” written in the form of an “Acrostic” with an internal rhyme.
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Lovely poem! I goes there’s a typo somewhere, as the prompt is ‘Trust’.
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Haha, thank you! I decided to imbibe ‘trust’ into the poem, rather than use it as an acrostic.
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Oh, okay!
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Love this; great work, my friend! 🙂
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Thank you very much Georgette 😊. Do you write acrostic?
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It’s Really great Ameena
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Thank you Mandi ☺. I actually found it not easy. How are you getting on with yours?
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You “rocked” this poem 🙂 and love the blue of the butterfly!
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Haha thank you Joy :D. I wish you’d signed up for it tho.
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AWW thanks Ameena, I do feel left out as I am reading everyone’s poems, BUT….. not in a bad way! I know the class would be hard for me for I am not a poet and I know it 🙂
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Haha, that’s what PJ said and so far she is doing Good! :D. Maybe next time? 😉
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Endearing thoughts. Love it.
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Aw, thank you! I didn’t think poetic style would be this hard?! 😀
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Hard helps us to jump over our boundaries and create a better version of our thoughts.
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Thank you Mandi. I actually found it not easy. How are you getting on with yours?
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It’s beautiful, Ameena! “Embrace the beauty you’ve become,
Rock your wings, unto safe haven” I like these two lines the most. 🙂
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Thanks Icha, i think i like “Rock your wings” best too. 🙂
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Excellant Ameena, and I feel it is talking about you. 🙂
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Pj, you’ve linked me to butterflies now! 😄 i actually wanted to write something else, but nothing came up, so i ended up with butterflies.
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Yes, I did but in a good way! Butterflies are beautiful! And they have had to go through a difficult situation to become a butterfly. 🙂 I thought it was beautiful!
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Yeah, truly beautiful creatures :). Aw, Thank you PJ. Your words make me smile ☺
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This is beautiful Ameena. 🙂
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Thank you so much 😊
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Just lovely. And that butterfly is gorgeous!
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Haha, Thank you Jade! It is a gorgeous butterfly 😀
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I really loved this ..it is so full of ‘freedom’ and energy ….and also liked how imbibed ‘trust’ in your poem rather than use it as acrostic 🙂
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Thank you Sweety. I wanted to try something different ;). But i do not know how i ended up with Butterfly 😀
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It did come out lovely 🙂
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