Haiku- Water Haiku- Water February 17, 2015February 17, 2015 by Ameena k.g Β flowing outwardly- clear, untainted, purified please, purify me. My submission to the first “writing201: Poetry” assignment. Write a Haiku using the prompt “Water” and the device “simile”. Share this:TwitterFacebookPinterestLike this:Like Loading... Related
Nice one, Ameena π I still have no idea for the 2nd challenge today haha LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Haha, i haven’t read the prompt yet. Got lectures now, will read up on it later. π LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Good take. The last line added a perfect completion to the first two lines. Brilliant! π LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thanks Prakash! π i appreciate it, it took me hours to write this. I and Haiku aren’t friends. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
π It has come up good. I did spend a lot for my first one, 4 months ago. (One small correction, In haiku, the first character of each line are not in caps) LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha, thank you π. I went through a lot of thinking too to finally come up with something π LikeLike Reply
wow. very evocative. I love the sound of hope bordering on desperation in the last line. great job! π LikeLike Reply
Nice one, Ameena π I still have no idea for the 2nd challenge today haha
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Haha, i haven’t read the prompt yet. Got lectures now, will read up on it later. π
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Good take. The last line added a perfect completion to the first two lines. Brilliant!
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Thanks Prakash! π i appreciate it, it took me hours to write this. I and Haiku aren’t friends.
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π It has come up good.
I did spend a lot for my first one, 4 months ago.
(One small correction, In haiku, the first character of each line are not in caps)
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Oh really, wow, thank you so much. Will keep it in mind. π
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Lovely idea with a thoughtful ending! Thanks for making me think! π
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Haha, thank you π. I went through a lot of thinking too to finally come up with something π
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wow. very evocative. I love the sound of hope bordering on desperation in the last line. great job! π
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Lovely Haiku and LOVE the picture of the waterfall!
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Thank you Joy π.
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