flowing outwardly-
clear, untainted, purified
please, purify me.
My submission to the first “writing201: Poetry” assignment. Write a Haiku using the prompt “Water” and the device “simile”.
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Nice one, Ameena 🙂 I still have no idea for the 2nd challenge today haha
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Haha, i haven’t read the prompt yet. Got lectures now, will read up on it later. 🙂
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Good take. The last line added a perfect completion to the first two lines. Brilliant!
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Thanks Prakash! 😄 i appreciate it, it took me hours to write this. I and Haiku aren’t friends.
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🙂 It has come up good.
I did spend a lot for my first one, 4 months ago.
(One small correction, In haiku, the first character of each line are not in caps)
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Oh really, wow, thank you so much. Will keep it in mind. 😊
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🙂
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Lovely idea with a thoughtful ending! Thanks for making me think! 🙂
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Haha, thank you 😄. I went through a lot of thinking too to finally come up with something 😀
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wow. very evocative. I love the sound of hope bordering on desperation in the last line. great job! 🙂
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Lovely Haiku and LOVE the picture of the waterfall!
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Thank you Joy 😊.
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